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View Profile Yeah, not bad, emo. Though I didn't liked the hand.
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View Profile |] oh you stereotypic guys. Thanks!
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View Profile Everythings too bulky.
Your neck should curve.
Your wrists are too straight. They should curve in a bit aswell.
Fingers are too small compared to the hand. Eyes are in two-different places, and finally, no shading.
Fix that, then i'll be able to say some more. (:
LIke the lack of creases in the clothing.
Keep it up though.
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View Profile I'm not going to do that. Art is in the eye of the beholder.
You may make your style the way you want. But what you said is like telling Cosmoseth to animate fullbody and not to double frame. No no no...
I know I messed up the right eye, it's a little higher. But the fingers and the wrists are just how I look. I traced over the outlines the gave it a cartoony bulky vibe.
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View Profile I'm just gonna say this, it's gonna be completely out of context but anyway;
What the **** is with the people in the art forum not taking crit'?
I don't care if you listen to it. But if you post it here, i'm going to give my opinion wether it's liked or not.
That wasn't aimed at you, i'm just pissed off with faggots posting art then not taking crit'.
It doesn't look cartoony. Well, the face doesn't. Alot of it doesn't. I've done cartoony graphics of my mates, it's really simple to do and takes nothing but time (If you're tracing).
Just add some shading, atleast. it looks bland.
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View Profile Its cool...just work on some of the points and you have an artwork!
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View Profile I actually really like the style, but it looks familiar. Where'd you get the idea for the style.
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View Profile I'm not going to do that. Art is in the eye of the beholder.
You may make your style the way you want. But what you said is like telling Cosmoseth to animate fullbody and not to double frame. No no no...
I know I messed up the right eye, it's a little higher. But the fingers and the wrists are just how I look. I traced over the outlines the gave it a cartoony bulky vibe.
Not cartoony, abstract maybe.
I kinda like it, but some part om me dislikes it too.
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View Profile I actually really like the style, but it looks familiar. Where'd you get the idea for the style.
For some reason, Adult Swim.