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Protocool22Posts: 26
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The Lightning Warrior
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Abilities: He is made of electricity and have a perfect control on it. He is a good hand to hand fighter and can fight a lot of enemies at the same time. He can create a thunderstorm, but he needs a lot of time.
Weaknesses: His speed is weakened when there is no electricity near.
About: he was made in a laboratory, but he was rejected because he was too dangerous.
Demo: http://www.truploader.com/view/794204
Battles: None
Points: 0 Wins & 0 Lose
Actually unavailable MadMirrors2Posts: 3,512
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View Profile Dude I like that people dig the electricity but your flaw seems to be a big weakness when is there going to be a chance of lighting being around? The only time that could be is if your fighting in a thunder storm. Since the odds are very unlikely that there would be a constant storm of lightning with you in every battle.Might one to edit this and re think how you use your your powers and pic a different source.
Protocool22Posts: 26
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View Profile Well I didn't think about this, but yes it's a problem. xD
I will edit it. Thanks!
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View Profile Dude I like that people dig the electricity but your flaw seems to be a big weakness when is there going to be a chance of lighting being around? The only time that could be is if your fighting in a thunder storm. Since the odds are very unlikely that there would be a constant storm of lightning with you in every battle.Might one to edit this and re think how you use your your powers and pic a different source.
Not true, he might fight somebody in a city filled with electric resources.
MadMirrors2Posts: 3,512
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View Profile wHAT PERSON WOULD LIVE IN PLACE LIKE THAT,excuse the caps
Silv2Posts: 605
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View Profile wHAT PERSON WOULD LIVE IN PLACE LIKE THAT,excuse the caps
What are you talking about, i mean't a place like New York, or Japan or something.
MadMirrors2Posts: 3,512
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View Profile oh, I thought you meant something completely industrial and electric powered
Silv2Posts: 605
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View Profile oh, I thought you meant something completely industrial and electric powered
actually that kind of place sounds cool but lets not get off subject.
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View Profile TBH, I see too many "just electricity" RHG's, it's getting rather annoying, and I look at them all and see them as flat-out boring. I recommend changing it to something more original, because then maybe people will like your RHG and will be more likely want to battle. ;)
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View Profile Dude I like that people dig the electricity but your flaw seems to be a big weakness when is there going to be a chance of lighting being around? The only time that could be is if your fighting in a thunder storm. Since the odds are very unlikely that there would be a constant storm of lightning with you in every battle.Might one to edit this and re think how you use your your powers and pic a different source.
NEIN!!!!
Electricity exists in many places, some of it caused by natural chemical reactions, others artificial
Ever play Infamous? nuff said
Yeah, electricity/lightning has been done to death, it can get real repetitive...
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View Profile Razor? Like this guy?

cuddy2Posts: 660
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View Profile Why can't somebody do the power of decay like my old RHG. It is much more original than lightning...
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View Profile TBH, I see too many "just electricity" RHG's, it's getting rather annoying, and I look at them all and see them as flat-out boring. I recommend changing it to something more original, because then maybe people will like your RHG and will be more likely want to battle. ;)
Do you wanna count how many RHGs have swords?
Protocool22Posts: 26
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View Profile Razor? Like this guy?

Well, I was inspired by him, but I tried to not totally do like character
and I see that you play DotA :P