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May 9, 2012 7:27 PM #652717
Razor
The Lightning Warrior

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Abilities: He is made of electricity and have a perfect control on it. He is a good hand to hand fighter and can fight a lot of enemies at the same time. He can create a thunderstorm, but he needs a lot of time.

Weaknesses: His speed is weakened when there is no electricity near.

About: he was made in a laboratory, but he was rejected because he was too dangerous.

Demo: http://www.truploader.com/view/794204

Battles: None

Points: 0 Wins & 0 Lose

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May 9, 2012 7:35 PM #652724
Dude I like that people dig the electricity but your flaw seems to be a big weakness when is there going to be a chance of lighting being around? The only time that could be is if your fighting in a thunder storm. Since the odds are very unlikely that there would be a constant storm of lightning with you in every battle.Might one to edit this and re think how you use your your powers and pic a different source.
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May 9, 2012 7:41 PM #652728
Well I didn't think about this, but yes it's a problem. xD
I will edit it. Thanks!
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May 9, 2012 7:46 PM #652731
Quote from MirrorsN'Mirror
Dude I like that people dig the electricity but your flaw seems to be a big weakness when is there going to be a chance of lighting being around? The only time that could be is if your fighting in a thunder storm. Since the odds are very unlikely that there would be a constant storm of lightning with you in every battle.Might one to edit this and re think how you use your your powers and pic a different source.


Not true, he might fight somebody in a city filled with electric resources.
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May 9, 2012 7:51 PM #652735
wHAT PERSON WOULD LIVE IN PLACE LIKE THAT,excuse the caps
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May 9, 2012 7:53 PM #652738
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wHAT PERSON WOULD LIVE IN PLACE LIKE THAT,excuse the caps


What are you talking about, i mean't a place like New York, or Japan or something.
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May 9, 2012 7:55 PM #652741
oh, I thought you meant something completely industrial and electric powered
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May 9, 2012 7:56 PM #652743
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oh, I thought you meant something completely industrial and electric powered


actually that kind of place sounds cool but lets not get off subject.
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May 9, 2012 8:05 PM #652748
TBH, I see too many "just electricity" RHG's, it's getting rather annoying, and I look at them all and see them as flat-out boring. I recommend changing it to something more original, because then maybe people will like your RHG and will be more likely want to battle. ;)
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May 9, 2012 8:07 PM #652750
Quote from MirrorsN'Mirror
Dude I like that people dig the electricity but your flaw seems to be a big weakness when is there going to be a chance of lighting being around? The only time that could be is if your fighting in a thunder storm. Since the odds are very unlikely that there would be a constant storm of lightning with you in every battle.Might one to edit this and re think how you use your your powers and pic a different source.


NEIN!!!!
Electricity exists in many places, some of it caused by natural chemical reactions, others artificial
Ever play Infamous? nuff said

Yeah, electricity/lightning has been done to death, it can get real repetitive...
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May 9, 2012 8:15 PM #652756
Razor? Like this guy?
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May 9, 2012 8:27 PM #652766
Why can't somebody do the power of decay like my old RHG. It is much more original than lightning...
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May 10, 2012 2:43 AM #653119
i challenge you bro :)
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May 10, 2012 2:46 AM #653120
Quote from Rosie
TBH, I see too many "just electricity" RHG's, it's getting rather annoying, and I look at them all and see them as flat-out boring. I recommend changing it to something more original, because then maybe people will like your RHG and will be more likely want to battle. ;)

Do you wanna count how many RHGs have swords?
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May 10, 2012 7:35 PM #653481
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Razor? Like this guy?
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Well, I was inspired by him, but I tried to not totally do like character
and I see that you play DotA :P