DownbeatViral First Flash combo test - CC needed

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May 22, 2012 2:11 AM #660766
Please let me know what you think, I need to know how to improve, I've only been working on flash for 2 days so I know that there's room for improvement.
If possible, redirect me to any tutorials that would help.


First animation:
http://www.truploader.com/view/053452
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May 22, 2012 2:35 AM #660795
I like the idea of adding the action in there.

I think to smoke disapears too fast and the kick looks too sudden.
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May 22, 2012 7:56 AM #660941
this is great!
but you need to ease more, particullary before the jump
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May 23, 2012 5:25 AM #661395
Like people said you need more easing and anticipation so that the movements are clear and visible. The first punch was freaking great, after that you need more frames between the hits, a little more wind-up before the kick and after the kick some easing.
But it did look pretty cool, just add those frames and repost it.