Hey guys! Just wanted to let you know that I started a webcomic over on ComicFury, you can see it here: http://boysandgirls.thecomicseries.com/
I plan to update it with a new comic every day from Monday to Friday, and then a colored one every Sunday.
What do you think? Should I keep doing this?
Started a Webcomic! :D
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May 27, 2012 5:17 AM #664251
May 27, 2012 5:24 AM #664255
work on the humor. Video Game humor doesn't really go very far. Try to make it original and witty, like Hark! A Vagrant.
May 27, 2012 5:29 AM #664257
Yeah, I know that first strip wasn't good. I just wanted to start as quick as possible.
Don't worry, the one tomorrow will be better :D I have lots of good punchlines in mind...
Don't worry, the one tomorrow will be better :D I have lots of good punchlines in mind...
May 27, 2012 9:14 AM #664353
it'd be better if one way or another there was shitloads of blood and guts, but that's probably just me
May 27, 2012 3:56 PM #664579
One key to a web comic is dedication (I know Devour will get on my ass about this one). But if you plan on this actually going somewhere then you have to stay committed while still keeping your ideas fresh.
I like your art style. It looks like something that will develop into very clean artwork as you continue to make these. I hope to see that.
I like your art style. It looks like something that will develop into very clean artwork as you continue to make these. I hope to see that.
May 27, 2012 9:17 PM #664798
I would say expand on the types of humor. Video game humor limits your audience. Also, try retracing everything to make it look cleaner. The style is nice, the presentation could use some work. But hey, you'll improve with time, so I'm looking forward to seeing more stuff maybe.
May 27, 2012 10:05 PM #664817
add some random death and unseen funny thing that no one pays attention to
May 27, 2012 11:13 PM #664842
I think the art style is pretty good, but my facial expression didn't even change at the dialog. It's almost like it was leading up to a punch line that never happened.
May 27, 2012 11:20 PM #664848
it was really flat, man. also fuck minecraft, im sick of hearing about it everywhere
May 27, 2012 11:33 PM #664865
Quote from 2-Dit was really flat, man. also fuck minecraft, im sick of hearing about it everywhere
OMG CREEPER!!11! lol mineing is so fun check out my house ;)
;);)
omg le creepers hehe endermen r so scary....:(...
May 29, 2012 3:51 AM #665961
Quote from SkaGrindit'd be better if one way or another there was shitloads of blood and guts, but that's probably just me
Quote from MirrorsN'Mirroradd some random death and unseen funny thing that no one pays attention to
don't listen to these people
May 30, 2012 1:32 PM #666933
Quote from Scarecrowdon't listen to these people
"but that's probably just me"
read more eat less
May 30, 2012 2:33 PM #666961
I would say that this is more funny than that:
Work on the comedy aspect. Think like a funny person.
Work on the comedy aspect. Think like a funny person.
May 30, 2012 7:38 PM #667087
it was
May 30, 2012 8:19 PM #667104
i don't think your sig is big enough faggot.