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Plathix

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Jun 6, 2012 1:23 PM #671467
I wanted to try an elemental explosion so I made this.
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The bottom are meant to be fire and lightning explosions. The top are random colors, tell me what you think they would be.
Keep in mind, these are meant to be stylized and cartoonish, not realistic.
Constructive criticism please.
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Jun 7, 2012 9:24 PM #672240
I think it looks really cool but its all one speed.. try making the explosion start out quick and sudden, an then start slowing down and expanding. Im not good at explosions myself but thats the only criticism I can give. keep it up!
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Jun 7, 2012 9:56 PM #672255
Yeah, it rly lacks force.
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Jun 7, 2012 10:37 PM #672262
Weather it's realistic or not, I loved it! The whole cartoon feeling is really entertaining! Nice job :D
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Jun 7, 2012 10:40 PM #672263
IT's good overall I liked the comicish feeling,

but if you say the bottom right one is lightning maybe you should change the particles so they look more like lightning bolts
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Jun 7, 2012 11:15 PM #672277
Yeah these weren't meant to be very forceful. I intended for them to be gentle and poofy. Also, thanks for the suggestion, Danick I'll try that! :)
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