Second full body trial!

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Jun 18, 2012 3:48 PM #679690
http://www.fileize.com/view/021b5c4e-1e5/

i know its short, and im going to add more later, but for now i want criticism on my uh, style i guess...
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Jun 18, 2012 3:51 PM #679692
pretty nice :D i'd like to see it when it's finished
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Jun 18, 2012 3:58 PM #679700
Highly appreciated!!! :D
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Jun 18, 2012 4:44 PM #679764
the throw to the ground was kinda wierd! it was like they were standing, then there was a mash of characters, and then one of them was on the ground!
it might help to spend more time on drawing the characters! they seemed rushed and slightly scribbled if you dont mind me saying :)
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Jun 19, 2012 5:06 AM #680149
Yeah the throw was a little off. But otherwise pretty nice animation. Definitely gonna be looking for the finished version.