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Started by: VDanger | Replies: 13 | Views: 1,087

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Jun 24, 2012 3:58 AM #683620
making new rhg.
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Jun 24, 2012 4:01 AM #683622
Where's ur story ? read the rules please
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Jun 24, 2012 4:02 AM #683623
please add a story, it's a rule.
you ninjated (i don't know if it's the right word) me, unknow >.>
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Jun 24, 2012 4:07 AM #683629
correct your words she became a he
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Jun 24, 2012 4:09 AM #683630
What is it a boy or a girl? You used both he and she, so it's confusing, you also missed the story and some other things.
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Jun 24, 2012 4:16 AM #683632
Welcome
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Jun 24, 2012 6:27 AM #683668
Whoops. I'm fixing.
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Jun 24, 2012 6:49 AM #683679
Need a better story
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Jun 24, 2012 7:01 AM #683685
Indeed. Like how she got her powers, her family, why she joined RHG, etc.
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Jun 24, 2012 7:09 AM #683692
good You fixed it,nice job
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Jun 24, 2012 8:59 AM #683720
Cool RHG!

Needs a more cooler story... And more weaknesses...
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Jun 24, 2012 11:26 AM #683788
Your story very short XD, shorter than me! D:
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Jun 24, 2012 6:41 PM #683980
I'm not good on writing stories :(
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Jun 24, 2012 6:44 PM #683984
That's why we have creativity it helps, learn how to use yours,and see what happens .