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Jun 25, 2012 6:19 PM #684522

Powers: sword and speed and bites lol

weakness: not so good at punching becuase you learn from your elders and raptors dont punch.

story: brang up by raptors so she runs like them. she was lobbed in the river when 3 weeks old becuase bad evil people. but some raptors saved her and kept her as there child. she then got amazing skills and went back to the city and to the rhg world. she is called orange becuase her hair..

demo ( took 2 days ) http://www.fileize.com/view/697f0302-cdb/

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Jun 25, 2012 6:22 PM #684527

You need to follow the rules exactly.
you can't just omit things
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?33615-Starting-Your-RHG

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Jun 25, 2012 6:23 PM #684531

You missed the availability, the points and the list of battles, and plus you need a longer story.

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Jun 25, 2012 6:25 PM #684533

A nice RHG you have there. Just a couple of things I have to point out:

1. You really should take this post a lot more seriously, try expanding in detail on weaknesses/story.

2. Your demo is good and smooth yes, but it doesn't really show your RHG in any detail at all. Apart from the running like a raptor. Try to include diffrent moves and show your RHG's weaknesses against some random stickmen. Just an idea.

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Jun 25, 2012 6:26 PM #684535

Well hey, Atleast he got the picture size right...

P.S Nice Avatar Rosie

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Jun 25, 2012 6:31 PM #684537

ok, i will do, im sorry about my mistakes.

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Jun 25, 2012 6:38 PM #684545

Time for the final dose of bitching:

You missed a leg, lol

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Jun 25, 2012 6:40 PM #684549

Thats still apart of her body, just bending abit, im sorry, it was rushed. ( you cant see her legs )

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Jun 25, 2012 6:55 PM #684558

Quote from Jombo
Your RHG image is pretty adorable, haha. Its a pretty straightforward RHG, seems fun to animate.

There is no required minimum length for stories.

I'd appreciate it if you guys would stop taking matters into your own hands, and instead report it to the team and we'll lock the thread or edit it accordingly. Criticizing RHGs is also pretty rude, because the original poster isn't asking for it. You guys aren't moderators.

That said, everything seems to be fine now. GL orange stick.

Well, we're just going off the fact that Omega locks threads with inadequate stories.