I drew Kizu's CR character Talitha as practice. It's pretty lazily colored and sketchy...

Dude, i like it. omg.
Her legs seem a bit short, and the hand on her hip looks a bit big....but that may just be me.

Shen pretty much pointed everything out that I noticed (wit the exception of the legs I think they look fine)
Nice job man she looks awesome

I love it, but I do notice a few flaws in the hair.

Yeah, I have no problem with the legs myself, the hand is a little big, my real problem is with the hair. Seems a little stiff to me. But other than that, it's a really good pic :3