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silver101

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Jul 8, 2012 1:53 AM #692469
this is my new demo hope you like it
http://www.fileize.com/view/969243a4-f48/

pls comment
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Jul 9, 2012 2:29 PM #693763
not bad! I see you like to do "Zetabrand" (whatever they call it) style. Try adding more frames where you can and doing a little bit of easing at the end when he finishes wouldn't hurt either. The blood needs some work, and its not really necessary if its just a few quick brush strokes. I liked how he charged up his force at the start right before he did the combo, the looked good. Over I liked it! Keep up the good work!
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Jul 9, 2012 2:35 PM #693768
what zive said basically. And yeah, the random senseless blood isn't necessary and looks bad
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Jul 9, 2012 2:58 PM #693784
nice combo man, if you need anything else, just pm me
and ill see what i can do :)
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Jul 10, 2012 8:09 AM #694405
Quote from Foscex
nice combo man, if you need anything else, just pm me
and ill see what i can do :)


tnx dudes ill follow what you all said to me
tnx bros:D