Just An Exercise

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Sh0tgun
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Aug 7, 2012 6:31 PM #713024
Can somebody PLEASE gimme feedback? :o
http://www.fileize.com/view/1d8bf5ab-232/
I'm still a beginner animator, so don't expect a whole lot!
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Aug 7, 2012 8:13 PM #713089
i suggest watching some tutorials. your not quite good enough to wear people can just comment on something they found wrong with it and be done! theres to much you need to fix then could be explained in one post! thats not ment to be mean :) your obviously new to animating so im just saying theres to much to critique about it!
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Aug 7, 2012 8:17 PM #713090
Quote from dabigE13
i suggest watching some tutorials. your not quite good enough to wear people can just comment on something they found wrong with it and be done! theres to much you need to fix then could be explained in one post! thats not ment to be mean :) your obviously new to animating so im just saying theres to much to critique about it!


lol. I already watched tons of tutorials, making that one of the most unhelpful pieces of feedback ever.
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Aug 8, 2012 2:27 AM #713252
The last frame when he goes into a stance after his double palm punch looks kinda awkward. As if you meant for his arms to go somewhere else but switched on the last few frames.

Only real thing of advice I can give. Only been on here a week. I'm trying to look more into detail though.
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Aug 8, 2012 3:11 AM #713270
thanks.