http://www.filz.us/4NN
So sketchy!
Anime style: FB and FX's
Started by: Cedric | Replies: 9 | Views: 748
Oct 31, 2012 5:00 PM #774601
Nov 1, 2012 10:45 PM #775561
ERMAHGAWD
I command you to finish this with coloring, background, FX, voice, music, SFX, N SHIT
I command you to finish this with coloring, background, FX, voice, music, SFX, N SHIT
Nov 1, 2012 11:03 PM #775573
really epic, continue it please :)
Nov 1, 2012 11:35 PM #775599
can you pm me, your inbox is full
Nov 2, 2012 12:15 AM #775634
you have now inspired me
finish eeetttt
finish eeetttt
Nov 2, 2012 1:34 AM #775718
work on how the character looks a bit, you kinda look like your still trying to get into drawing anime characters and also, have the pieces of the ground be in the air for longer, I think it would give it a cool effect. plus smoke being pushed downward torwarsds the ground and then going outwards would look good imo
Nov 3, 2012 1:07 AM #776577
ALSO, your hand is backwards. Thumb would be inward, not outward. XD
Nov 3, 2012 12:24 PM #776981
no the thumb was in the right place it just looked like its on the side closer to us because of the lack on shadows on the palm
Nov 3, 2012 1:08 PM #777005
You could've made a couple of lines in front of it to indicate it's behind.
Nov 3, 2012 2:33 PM #777091
I went frame by frame, and it is clearly shown outward. Even when its open and closed. From the imag http://www.fileize.com/view/a387a26a-d95/e, it would be his right hand turned backwards. It's probably a small error, but that would be a EXTREMELY unnatural and uncomfortable position. Examples: 
He showed no effort to push the thumb behind his palm like it should be. The animation itself i like just that one bit bugs me.
He showed no effort to push the thumb behind his palm like it should be. The animation itself i like just that one bit bugs me.