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Nov 11, 2012 10:12 PM #784879

Hi guys, I went to gymn and practice some animation c:

jk. it's my first animation longer than 10 secs. ( I call it gymn because saying "test" is kinda boring )
I'm very new on animation, so give me tons of suggestions, but don't go hard on me.
http://www.fileize.com/view/ae67fbbe-2d4/

If you want you can also support me on dA, I would be very grateful <3
http://fr4ctex.deviantart.com/#/d5kt0hv

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Nov 11, 2012 10:13 PM #784881

I no replay,But it was still good

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Nov 11, 2012 10:14 PM #784887

That punching bag looks like it popped like a water balloon, but other than that it was pretty good

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Nov 11, 2012 10:21 PM #784898

hhhmmnn. GOOD!

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Nov 11, 2012 10:26 PM #784900

kk i'm gonna be real with you this was good but wasn't smooth the punching bag was a water balloon the sword stab was super slow and the laser was good add more particles though they take time but make a difference in the end!

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Nov 11, 2012 10:29 PM #784902

Quote from Scooty
That punching bag looks like it popped like a water balloon, but other than that it was pretty good

Yeah, it wasn't very good as all, it's supposed to be that stuff that punch, in the gymn xD Idk the name

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Nov 11, 2012 10:31 PM #784904

The little thing they put on a Small chain and punch and it bounces back and they punch again?

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Nov 11, 2012 10:31 PM #784905

Quote from Yukio
kk i'm gonna be real with you this was good but wasn't smooth the punching bag was a water balloon the sword stab was super slow and the laser was good add more particles though they take time but make a difference in the end!

Thank you for the suggestion. I did my best, but I will make it better next time, I dedicated my sweet whole weekend doing this smalliich animation.

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Nov 11, 2012 10:40 PM #784915

Never think of your animation as bad just think of it as good and needs improvement! :D

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Nov 11, 2012 10:42 PM #784916

Quote from Yukio
Never think of your animation as bad just think of it as good and needs improvement! :D

Gee, thanks Dr. Phil

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Nov 11, 2012 11:10 PM #784942

Thank you guys :)

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Nov 11, 2012 11:24 PM #784958

I lold when he tapped the dude on the head with the sword
I was going to give a lengthy post on what could be fixed, but it can be summed up like this:
for everything besides your effects, you're trying too hard.