Well.... This is my first serious attempt at make some draw in SAI, I reaaalllyyyyy need CnC, I want to improve fast :3

So yeah what do you think? =D

looks pretty good. the only problem i can see is his hair... it looks like he has 2 sets of hair

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looks pretty good. the only problem i can see is his hair... it looks like he has 2 sets of hair

lol yeah.... I'm still trying to get used to the new brush pressure... i ... <.<... drew the hair twice xD

It is probably just me, but I think there should be a higher contrast between Ichigo's head and the mask, and a small part of fhe hair looks a bit... 2-D. Despite that this is stil a brilliant drawing and every GOOD artist can take critisism (even if not from an expert) and make their next drawing awesome. Can't wait to see more from you cami.

wow awesome cami :D

So..much..bleach...@_@

The eye is abit off, and there's no value origin.
Moving the eye abit more to the right and shrinking it just abit would fix that problem.
As for value, pick a direction from where the light would be coming from and reflecting off the figure, and fill in value according to the opposite position of where the light source is.
ex. The light source is the sun and the earth is the figure.
The light reflects off the part of the earth facing the sun, and the value (Or shadows) take form opposite of that side.

*takes notes*

Thx xero :3

HOLY *censored* THIS IS AWESOME.

I bet if we give Xero an art test he would definitely going to pass with with an A without any problem at all, LOL XD
huh dont you guys think? ahahah, btw that's a compliment, not a troll LOL :)

Okay, now its my turn to help the sexy girl out :)
well, I'm not sure if you've noticed this already or not but if you'd just take a good look at his neck again carefully,
i think his neck is a little bit too small so if you can, get that fix, and always remember, proportions is also key if you
want to achieve good results when drawing human, unless you really want something else but since we're
just focusing on this, proportion is key for now, so yeah try to fix. Other than that, i'd say this a great piece of art :)

Thanks vincent, i'll have that in mind next time :3

*falls from chair*

OH GOD O_O'
SCREW THAT CAMILA!
DAMNIT!

OH GOD...

OHHH.. MOTHEFAKIN GOD....

(i mean , that was amazing o_e')

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*falls from chair*

OH GOD O_O'
SCREW THAT CAMILA!
DAMNIT!

OH GOD...

OHHH.. MOTHEFAKIN GOD....

(i mean , that was amazing o_e')

*cami is processing post*
. . . .

*reads little letters*
Oohh!! Thanks guz!!! =D

WOW Camila that is really cool :D how do you get such sharp points on your lines? cus i still need to figure out the tools and stuff :3

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WOW, NIC CAMILA, WHAT DID YOU DO THAT WITH?
and did u do it your self?

I used a program called SAI .... And yes I did it for myself >_> otherwise I wouldn't say "I made this" lol