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Nov 26, 2012 11:53 AM #798765
Quote from balistiik
if quik takes a look at this
there shall be more than just fapping


OH MEK YOU TOOL!!!!
I've done male/ female naked pics without fapping before...
Like this one:
http://quikanims.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d54jfti

And yes I did make a male anatomy pic, but I didn't know if the guy I drew would like having his body exploited like that, I drew a guy on this online community naked...
Yes, dick and everything...

BUT ON TOPIC!!!!!
Very good pic but I feel the face is a bit cramped on the head and she needs more curve in her hips...
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Nov 26, 2012 11:55 AM #798766
"Pretty bad"?

First, you implied that someone should have an adequate skill in drawing in order to have the right to critique art.

Second, you outright said that, as I have never seen a real, naked woman in real life (probably), my critique is bad.

Your words are outrageous.

You see hands everyday. You can't draw them. You see faces everyday. You can't draw them either. Perhaps you have seen a naked woman yourself. You don't seem to be able to draw it any better than an artist who hasn't.

I don't need to see a naked woman in real life to draw one. References are there for a reason. I know the muscles involved in the human body. Knowing this gives me a clear idea of the shape of the human body. Perhaps I am not a very adequate artist (yet), but I can say for certain, with my anatomical studies, that the woman was drawn wrong, wrong, wrong.

Stop making excuses. I'd rather you admit right now that you are too proud to listen than to throw up worthless, paper thin excuses which only emphasizes your ignorance.
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Nov 26, 2012 12:23 PM #798782
lol? i didn't say that all of your critique was bad, but i don't have any understanding for things like

"And the waist
the WAIST
ABSOLUTELY NO UNDERSTANDING OF THE TORSO MUSCLES INVOLVED
It's like...
a...
a sex doll!
A blow up sex doll! "

"The head isn't good either. You tried to make it look realistic, but."

i'm the last person, who'd say cnc isn't important, but you sound like the biggest douche on earth.

"I am not a very adequate artist (yet)"

so don't act like one, if you'd be a decent artist, i'd appriciate your cnc, but i bet you're just one of those ppl, who draw animecrap, all day and now think you're good enough to give critique, the way way you just did.

Show me that you're any better than me, and if you are, i'm sorry for everything i said, but if you don't, gtfo and don't act like an arts-student

@quik
"Very good pic but I feel the face is a bit cramped on the head and she needs more curve in her hips..."

yah, i have to admit i messed up the face :< YA LIKE BIG BOOTY BITCHES HUH?! :P
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Nov 26, 2012 2:30 PM #798870
I'll emphasise this again. Your progress/improvement is irrelevant to me. I don't care if you don't listen, because another bad artist in SP is fine to me.

But I will have to say this. Don't underestimate "anime-style" drawings. There are artists who conform to that style yet make brilliant works that are eons better than what you can do with your...well, whatever style you call it.

But of course, if you mean many bad artists try to emulate "anime-style", I don't doubt it. I've seen plenty to make me cringe.

http://hippie.nu/~unicorn/tut/xhtml/#basics-humananatomy

My final link. Do check it out, or stay a failure.
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Nov 26, 2012 3:01 PM #798888
@lobbotomizer: you know, you could've given c&c without seeming like an elitist snob. as shocking as that may be to you, it is very much a possibility.

anyway, this drawing is good, but the head seems a little small, and the waist should probably be curved a bit more on the right side. other than that, i think it's good.
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Nov 26, 2012 3:37 PM #798907
@lobotomizer i saw one of your drawings, so shhhhht

@manny hmm..yeah i guess what you mean, i'll try to make it better next time :>
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Nov 26, 2012 4:41 PM #798928
interesting, considering I don't display my art here. Please show me that link.
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Nov 26, 2012 5:39 PM #798955
http://www.fileize.com/files/baff764b/c9e/kalena.png
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Nov 26, 2012 7:25 PM #799013
Well to me, this looks alright, though I'm not gonna lie that it of course has some flaws in it but just as he said it, he's not a perfect artist yet so I'm not gonna judge much,
i guess the only thing that needs to be fix the most would be the face and down the neck connect to her chest, other than that, this is still a go, not bad if it's his first try
on female anatomy, if not, still looks great, just keep it up Syntax, you're on the right track :)
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Nov 26, 2012 10:54 PM #799151
Wait, Vincent- X?
A- are you...?

XXOTHESITY??!!!!!
MY GAWD!!!!

*tears off clothes...

MAKE LOVE TO ME!!!!!!!!
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Nov 26, 2012 10:56 PM #799153
Quote from Vincent - X
Well to me, this looks alright, though I'm not gonna lie that it of course has some flaws in it but just as he said it, he's not a perfect artist yet so I'm not gonna judge much,
i guess the only thing that needs to be fix the most would be the face and down the neck connect to her chest, other than that, this is still a go, not bad if it's his first try
on female anatomy, if not, still looks great, just keep it up Syntax, you're on the right track :)

OMG! XXOTHESITY!!??! That really you? Maannn bro! We go waayy backk!
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Nov 26, 2012 11:07 PM #799156
umm did i missed something ? who is vincent-x <.
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Nov 26, 2012 11:30 PM #799172
she needs clothes
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Nov 26, 2012 11:34 PM #799175
Quote from Quik
Wait, Vincent- X?
A- are you...?

XXOTHESITY??!!!!!
MY GAWD!!!!

*tears off clothes...

MAKE LOVE TO ME!!!!!!!!


Hmmm wow Quik, you got good eyes, even i can't get away from those "Quick" eyes, LOL...
but yeah it's me, XD

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OMG! XXOTHESITY!!??! That really you? Maannn bro! We go waayy backk!


Yeah, old friend LOL XD :)


Quote from Syntax
umm did i missed something ? who is vincent-x <.


Vincent is me, LOL eheheh, im no one special, just one of a friend :)
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Nov 27, 2012 12:28 AM #799216
Vincent mannn! You missed a lot! PM me bro, I'll keep you up to date on what I've been doing
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