So much hate in this thread, learn to love, people.


The first animation I thought, was stiff, and it's completely obvious in the first one, if you look at the arms. Also, the legs were choppy too. Work on anticipation also. But, you're getting there.

As for the second one, I'd say it's a bit better, but since when could someone jump off of air?

Er, zombpiv. That was hardly constructive criticism. Telling someone it's stiff and that he should go to the beginner's section is not helpful. God, I thought you would know better, since you're from DD and all and you make a point to remind us of that by hinting that something is from someone from DD or PP.


First animation had many parts where certain body parts did not move. Like the arms and back. Try to move all the parts, no matter how little. Easing and smoothness were acceptable though. The second animation's kick, shouldn't have slown down. It should have eased into the kick as in; the stick figure shouldn't have stopped before the initial kick. And uncheck palette to avoid color rape.

i like it ehhehheh

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if it wasnt helpful how come you took my advice and shrunk your sig.
DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!

wow that duuuuh is really imitating your avatar bloo! it was so like him!

wow im odd.


Yeah, there was two sizes for my goddamn sig. one was massive, teh other one a midget.
midgets rawk.

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god your retarded.
DD have the best hard crit, because they have ranks and if you don't reach expectations and don't ****ing try, then you deserve to be crited as hard as you can.
noone reply to this if it isnt about the animation, its over.

Biggest load of bullshit ever.
Ranks mean jack shit.
Just because someone is new doesn't mean they deserve to be flamed, help the new members so they still animate for fun and not to get to a high rank so they can feel superior to 12 year olds on the internet.

Protip:DD sucks and always will.

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Biggest load of bullshit ever.
Ranks mean jack shit.
Just because someone is new doesn't mean they deserve to be flamed, help the new members so they still animate for fun and not to get to a high rank so they can feel superior to 12 year olds on the internet.

You animate for fun but still wish to get better at what your doing.
To be honest, Zombpiv you've turned into a flame crazy member. Thought you were better than this..

DW stfu i never said once that ranks were good, i said DD had ranks which lonewolf brought up so, yah.
also Ghost when flamming needs to be done, shall we flame.
as if noone has ever flammed.
dont be hypercritical ¬¬

DW you becoming a mod was the biggest bullshit ive ever heard.

First of all, DW shouldn't be mod for having an opinion?

Also, ranks are opinions. They aren't bad and they aren't good.

'Nother thing, since when is flaming needed? All it does is get people pissed off.

Listen, I have nothing against you, I don't want you to be this way. You are a great pivoter. That's probably not why you've gone to the world of critisize, critisize, and critisize.

You'll lose respect if you keep this up.

I guess flaming is okay if it's... occasional, but I think you have something against Jet is what it is. I don't know, but I don't like it.

yeah, i've noticed that. and im sick of it, but noone cares, cause this is teh internet, so im just gonna say:
zombpiv, you may be a good pivoter, but respect is something you need to earn from posts, not pivots.
and im done.
please dont reply by flaming me, zomb. if your going to be sensible, then fine, but dont flame me.
please.

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DW stfu i never said once that ranks were good, i said DD had ranks which lonewolf brought up so, yah.
also Ghost when flamming needs to be done, shall we flame.
as if noone has ever flammed.
dont be hypercritical ¬¬

DW you becoming a mod was the biggest bullshit ive ever heard.

I'll stop posting in this thread after this comment.

SPP is not DD.

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DW stfu i never said once that ranks were good, i said DD had ranks which lonewolf brought up so, yah.
also Ghost when flamming needs to be done, shall we flame.
as if noone has ever flammed.
dont be hypercritical ¬¬

DW you becoming a mod was the biggest bullshit ive ever heard.

Do you even understand what the hell you are talking about!?

FLAMING: NEEDLESSLY SAYING THEY "****ing suck and should go get a life lololololololo-" Etc.

ACTUAL USEFULCRITISISM: COMPLIMENT CRITISISM COMPLIMENT- E.G

That was a good try but... You should improve on... But I like...

Do that and earn some freaking respect. There is NEVER a need to flame.

Even if someone is being an idiot, there is a report button. Never flame.

I also like how (I can't remember exactly what you said) but you basically said people only deserve critisism if they are good.

WRONG

Critisism tells people how to get BETTER. If they can only get critisism when they are already good, what's the freaking point!? Telling someone who is amazing to get better and people who actually can get better to gtfo is like making a sandwich, realizing you forgot the butter and BINNING the whole thing instead of just adding the butter.

ANIMATION( I got carried away sorry.):

Arms are stiff. Some of the moves looked kind of awkward, but very smooth.

i actually like the 2nd one better with the leg twiching. lol.

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when youve been here almost a year you start to see the worst noobs and you cant but to flame.

Are you sure about that?
How many times have I flamed?

@Jet
I loved the ending for the second one, sorry I couldn't see the first one.
Twitching.. :)

thanks.
dang it, i really liked the first.
its mah current faveorite.
naglfar, its been a while :)