Rap Wars

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May 16, 2008 2:13 PM #136223
That's crap, fool, you mother****ing prick,
That rap is too looong, and it just makes me sick.
What the hell is going on, foo's just trying to rhyme,
This whole thread is a con, admit it this time.

You need some drum-n-bass, some music, some taste,
White boys trying to make some good shit in haste.
In me there is some great dis-sat-is-fact-SHUN.
Hand over that belt, bro, cause Bonk-jus-won.

WURD YALL.
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May 16, 2008 3:25 PM #136245
Voilà! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin van-guarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it's my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

oh wait-
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May 16, 2008 4:47 PM #136257
There once was a man named Bertold
Who drank beer when the weather grew cold
As he reached for his cup…
“NEEEEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP!!!”
Oh, snap! You just got limerickrolled!
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May 16, 2008 5:28 PM #136267
Quote from Myself
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Yo Nekow,

He's a pretty tight dude

some people may find him kind of prude

but what they don't know is that he will elude

And he wants to touch little girls in the

uh-oh, here comes the FBI

nekows safe he hides with lies

if they found his folders oh my oh my

I don't care what they say

cuz he's still a great guy

2-D, now there's a mother ****

if you find him you're out of luck

you ask for a favor and he'll want a suck-suck

he likes jailbait and he's in to date-rape

but don't be late to accept your fate

he gets pissed when he has to wait

cuz than he'll have to get out his roll of ductape

Hey Miniman!

He has a big foot fetish

I have a weird feeling that he likes to **** lettuce

when he sees a hot chick he gets sorta wettish

and he wont shut the **** up about 9/11

Miniman is a pretty short guy

who gives a **** he's still pretty fly

i get creeped out when he ever walks by

but at least he ain't a faggot that's shy

Zmobie Man!

Yeah he's pretty ****in' chill

he likes to smoke pot cuz he's so ill

he's got a bandana and he's ready to kill

he doesn't like shrimp and he don't like krill

Yo here's a fun fact, he's a jew!

that's somethin' thats kinda sort of new

he's got a big dick and really cool shoes

he likes the bong and alcohol too!

Oh Piggypup!

Now there's a sick little man

he don't like sex he just ain't a big fan

he's connected to the internnet via lan

he's the guy who really likes to ****in' spam

He draws some weird shit just to **** with you're head

your inner child will be quickly dead

that's right yall heard what I mother****ing said

after this you'll be taking ****ing a truckload of meds

DEMON OF YOUR SOUL

His name if ****ing opium scum

he's a quiet guy he don't really like to run

wherever he goes he always is shunned

make sure you don't give this mother****er a gun

He's a satanist man he wirships the guy

he's probably hoping that I will die

for making up all these stupid ****ing rhymes

but you know what that shit is just alright

HENTICK

Now this guys a ****ing nazi

OH SHIT ZMOBIE WATCH OUT HE KNOWS YOU'RE A JEW

FINNERWOO

Now this guy real ****in' tight

this guy's more epic than the sunni's and shiites

he doesn't like grass and he really hates kites

some say he's the funniest guy alive

He loves the web but has a social life

anyone who disagrees answers to his knife

he'll never end up with a ****ing wife

He's the next grim roeper he just needs a scythe


What?


good times.
i miss him :[
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May 17, 2008 1:59 AM #136448
Stuff mcgruff
chicago illinoise
60652



I hate all of you.
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May 17, 2008 2:21 AM #136455
syllables dribble like mollasses
out the asses of these Em Cees
cant look past this pair of smokestacks in them teeth
most would soak that with saline
like hankerchief, like organic beef
coupled with the swine
my rhymes age like wine
booze and pork dinna nigga trust me im fine.
just need my critical loaf to sustain no mold
yall can still boast, but decades its been told
that you cant touch this midwest delicacy
literacy high, like minnesota snowfall inches
cringes at the crys
of your cupped mic', cupped by the flys
buzzin round your pile, and that shit aint mine.
heard round the church from a couple 'a nosy nuns
that unwary children shouldn't **** with my guns

haha, I don't even know were I came up with that.
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May 18, 2008 5:47 AM #137203
ohhhh. Looks like a killed the thread with my sick rhym3s yo. haha.
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May 18, 2008 5:51 AM #137205
http://www.atomfilms.com/film/gangsta_rap.jsp

lol luk i maid a rap muvi@
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May 18, 2008 6:06 AM #137206
no you didnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 18, 2008 6:22 AM #137232
Quote from Audix
no you didnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


denial in audix, flows north like the nile
north to the place where animators multiply
wont find truth in exclamation points
just use extras, and keep the ego moist
keep it levitated on hoist-
like the bombs im gonna drop on these boys
play with yea like toys

inevitable like gravity
lyrics jump around you dastardly
ninja takin tolls of hip hop casaulties
after me-
take a count of the severed limbs
assemble them to make a new rap bout your mercedes rims (what?)

tweaked like amphetamines
ill get you double salty
like two saltines
and by that I mean-
twist you round like bop-it
(in the 90's i'd cop it)

Keeping up is ridiculous
difficulty - hardcore
please note the reference to- gears -of war
**** yeah- video games in hip hop
fits together a little like pop-rocks and soda pop

as in explosions (in mah belleh!)
as in erosion
of the substance in your rhymes
check the new york times
"wall street says psilo will make ya feel sour like limes"
that didn't flow, the way Id expect
kinda bounced around
like a fundless check

now i'm finished by definition
definition of my vivid vision of yall
is a repitition of a yawn
spurred by the weak skills i see this dawn
dawn like,morning, or is that dusk?
I cant really give a ****
im just messin with yall ducks (QUACKIN!)
I don't ever rap
only on stickpage
i forget to mention- at rappin im a level 41 sage.


haha this is so fun you have no idea.
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May 18, 2008 6:33 AM #137254
this thread sucks
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May 18, 2008 6:35 AM #137259
Quote from the Jawz
this thread sucks


Most of the raps do. They use the same rhyme schemes that their fourth grade english teachers taught them.

Mine aren't actually that well flowing. If my vocabulary was a little wider I could come up with something sick for sure.
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May 18, 2008 6:41 AM #137266
use a thesaurus bro
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May 18, 2008 6:43 AM #137267
Quote from the Jawz
use a thesaurus bro


See I was just thinking to myself about that. But I realized that I don't want to use a word I don't completely understand the meaning of, I'd feel like I'm cheating. I can use a thesaurus to study new vocabulary though.
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May 18, 2008 6:46 AM #137269
Well, you could find a word that would fit in your rap, learn its meaning and then use it in the rap and gain +1 vocab.