Background and stick drawing

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Nov 29, 2012 8:54 PM #802045
This is my first SERIOUS attempt at drawing in flash.
http://www.filz.us/9jF
Can you guys give me some Cnc please?
Progression: http://www.filz.us/9jK
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Nov 29, 2012 8:57 PM #802046
So..many...errors...where to start...the reflection needs to be more than just head and smaller. If sun pointing at his face, the shadow cant be at his front! Im too lazy to give more CnC.
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Nov 29, 2012 8:59 PM #802049
Quote from Gumball
So..many...errors...where to start...the reflection needs to be more than just head and smaller. If sun pointing at his face, the shadow cant be at his front! Im too lazy to give more CnC.

I know there are loads of problems.... I said it was my first attempt.
*EDIT* Changed the shadow and reflection and added my weapon.
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Nov 29, 2012 9:13 PM #802060
where is it the picture? the link doesn't work, its broken, fix it LOL
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Nov 29, 2012 9:14 PM #802062
Why is the reflection so lumpy? It's like he's made of clay. And the link is fine, click it until it works. Honestly...
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Nov 29, 2012 9:14 PM #802063
Quote from Vincent - X
where is it the picture? the link doesn't work, its broken, fix it LOL

I just clicked it and it was there try again lol.

Quote from Scooty
Why is the reflection so lumpy? It's like he's made of clay. And the link is fine, click it until it works. Honestly...

Errm it was kinda due to an unsteady hand but thanks.... now I see I can't get away with it.