Well currently I'm working on my RHG, probably finished in a month.
The RHG will be Seartan's grandson.
I will not tell you the name, and if someone took my idea, I'm going to sue his ass until it turned to a bloody corpse.
Stick Empires Story Competition!
Started by: DragonFrost | Replies: 199 | Views: 7,959
Feb 3, 2013 11:42 AM #871522
Feb 4, 2013 3:09 AM #872396
Frost Im going to post a storie just gimmer time
I have the general idea but imma post tommorrow cause im tired and need to fiinish up some last minute details
I have the general idea but imma post tommorrow cause im tired and need to fiinish up some last minute details
Feb 4, 2013 3:28 AM #872411
No problem, the deadline is April 1st :D lots of time.
P.s. Wyzdm is going to write a story :D
P.s. Wyzdm is going to write a story :D
Feb 4, 2013 3:29 AM #872413
Hey Frost, why don't you put the competitor list in the OP so that people can find other peoples' stories.
Feb 4, 2013 3:31 AM #872415
Mms, good idea. I'll go copy it.
Feb 4, 2013 3:40 AM #872424
Quote from DragonFrostNo problem, the deadline is April 1st :D lots of time.
P.s. Wyzdm is going to write a story :D
Wait, the due date is April first...
WHAT IF THERE WAS NO PRIZE. IT'S ALL AN APRIL FOOLS.
Feb 4, 2013 3:44 AM #872429
Ikri mentioned that in the deadline XD but... I don't know what's a good reward...
Feb 5, 2013 1:14 AM #873237
My storie will be delayed cause it didn't save my draft
Feb 5, 2013 1:53 AM #873268
T.T guys make sure to save you stories first >.>
Feb 5, 2013 2:12 AM #873286
Frost wait im posting my stoire now so do leave yet XD
Feb 5, 2013 2:14 AM #873291
Well I can just add it tomorrow :3
Feb 5, 2013 2:39 AM #873319
finsihed a part of it but SP wont let me post it imma try again
I am Trent, leader of the speartons and today I will tell you how we took back immorta (idk how to write) from the evil whitch Medusa!!!!!!!!!
Part 1
I sense a dark rising said a magikill on the way to his merics class. When he entered his pupil Medusa (yep gthats right)
asked if she could learn offensive magic like the magikill. NOOO!!!! Said the magkill in a stern steady voice. Do not ask me again. After hereing this the merics gave up all except medusa she stole a sacred book of dark magic from the libary. She then practiĉed for months wating for the chance to oppose the magikill and create there own race of magic wielders.
But the week before her uprising a magikill caught her. Oh hey teacher I was just returning this to the magi..................... it was too late the magikill burned the book with his blast spell and banned Medusa from entering the magikills territory. Medusa was so angry that she raged off like a swordwrath. She ran into the dark forest not knowing of that. he bumped in the Marrowkai leader of chaos. Why hello meric is there a problem? MONSTER STAY AWAY FROM ME!!!!! yelled Medusa using a dark absorbing spell on the Marrowkai. The marrowkai turned into stone and the meric absorbing alot of power went into transformation. Snakes grew out of here hair and she turned evil a great meric turned into stone. She then went killing her way to the chaos empire. This is where ill makemy stand and then no magikill will ever be able to oppose me. She entered the castle where it was lunch time. Perfect all in one room. I am Medusa your new leader, showing the Chief Marrowkais head to them all to see. They were stunned. Chaos was a nice empire. The chief Marrowkai simply wanted every monster to live in harmony with humans. So he let any creature join. He was nice unlike medusa. I was a Juggerknigh then commander of a squad. A jugger opposed her and said Your not our leader so get out or die raising his axe. Fool! yelled medusa turning him to stone. Now all bow down to your new ruler Medusa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 2
At midnight me and my men left the castle trying to get word of the new threat to the magikill, but we were spoted by another group of juggers on potrol. Hey chief Your early for your shift, or are you doing something stupid again. It went silent. Attack yelled the patrol of juggers. my men startled fell back. He quickly charged out and escaped. But we lozst 4 good men. Hunt, animal, four , food (LOL those r the 4 names). When we reached the magikill we were exausted. We told the magikill about the info and they dicided to...................
To be continued
I am Trent, leader of the speartons and today I will tell you how we took back immorta (idk how to write) from the evil whitch Medusa!!!!!!!!!
Part 1
I sense a dark rising said a magikill on the way to his merics class. When he entered his pupil Medusa (yep gthats right)
asked if she could learn offensive magic like the magikill. NOOO!!!! Said the magkill in a stern steady voice. Do not ask me again. After hereing this the merics gave up all except medusa she stole a sacred book of dark magic from the libary. She then practiĉed for months wating for the chance to oppose the magikill and create there own race of magic wielders.
But the week before her uprising a magikill caught her. Oh hey teacher I was just returning this to the magi..................... it was too late the magikill burned the book with his blast spell and banned Medusa from entering the magikills territory. Medusa was so angry that she raged off like a swordwrath. She ran into the dark forest not knowing of that. he bumped in the Marrowkai leader of chaos. Why hello meric is there a problem? MONSTER STAY AWAY FROM ME!!!!! yelled Medusa using a dark absorbing spell on the Marrowkai. The marrowkai turned into stone and the meric absorbing alot of power went into transformation. Snakes grew out of here hair and she turned evil a great meric turned into stone. She then went killing her way to the chaos empire. This is where ill makemy stand and then no magikill will ever be able to oppose me. She entered the castle where it was lunch time. Perfect all in one room. I am Medusa your new leader, showing the Chief Marrowkais head to them all to see. They were stunned. Chaos was a nice empire. The chief Marrowkai simply wanted every monster to live in harmony with humans. So he let any creature join. He was nice unlike medusa. I was a Juggerknigh then commander of a squad. A jugger opposed her and said Your not our leader so get out or die raising his axe. Fool! yelled medusa turning him to stone. Now all bow down to your new ruler Medusa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 2
At midnight me and my men left the castle trying to get word of the new threat to the magikill, but we were spoted by another group of juggers on potrol. Hey chief Your early for your shift, or are you doing something stupid again. It went silent. Attack yelled the patrol of juggers. my men startled fell back. He quickly charged out and escaped. But we lozst 4 good men. Hunt, animal, four , food (LOL those r the 4 names). When we reached the magikill we were exausted. We told the magikill about the info and they dicided to...................
To be continued
Feb 5, 2013 2:42 AM #873324
Good story, bad grammar, perhaps don't make simple sentences and better vocab. But overall pretty good.
Feb 5, 2013 2:42 AM #873325
Not bad, except at the start it says SPEARTON leader, but at the end it says JUGGERKNIGHT.
Feb 5, 2013 2:43 AM #873328
Yemme finsih its explains it all in next part