wRHG: Arvine "The Dragunov" Mage

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Feb 9, 2013 11:52 AM #878030
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He who increaseth knowledge, increaseth sorrow......
-Fransesco's last words.
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Name:

Arvine Callahan

Abilities:

Able to cast spells, and merge with dragon's soul.
He was a young mage, his powers are astounding during the Dragon Merge.
And during his Ultima Version, he is invincible!
(He's also able to speak to their spirits!)
Spells (Click to Show)

Dragon Merge (Click to Show)

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ling Arvine to empower Lightning/Wind-based attacks
Immune to Lightning/Wind-based attacks, character's speed and power are increased
Special Spell:
Heaven's Nine Fury- Cast a barrage of 9 lightning to an area, destroying anything on it's path.

(All spell cooldown is halved, lightning/wind spells don't have any cooldown.)
Looks:
A yellow aura surrounds Arvine, and his hair and eyes turned yellow.
Cost: 10% of stamina, duration 20 seconds
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Arvine to empower Ice/Water-based attacks
Immune to Frost/Water-based attacks, character's speed and power are increased
Special Spell:
Ice Craft- Arvine are able to create weapons made of ice, this can take in many form(Shield, Spear, even rifles!,etc...)

(All spell cooldown is halved, Ice/Water spells don't have any cooldown.)
Looks:
A blue aura surrounds Arvine, and his hair and eyes turned blue.
Cost: 10% of stamina, duration 20 seconds
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Arvine to empower Dark/Void-based attacks
Immune to Dark/Void-based attacks, character's speed and power are increased
Special Spell:
Shadow Walker- Creates a clone from Arvine's shadow. It's spell are 50% less effective,and 30 seconds lifetime.

(All spell cooldown is halved, dark spells don't have any cooldown.)
Looks:
A grey aura surrounds Arvine, and his hair and eyes turned grey.
Cost: 10% of stamina, duration 20 seconds
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and Chaos Dragon's soul, causing Arvine to take form in ranged and melee combat!
Immune to none, character's speed and power are increased
Special Spell:
Purging Blades- Using Light Dragon's power, bless the sword, causing it to release a purging fire!
Disintegration- Using Chaos Dragon's power, charge the magic cannon to shoot disintegration laser to the enemy.

(All spell cooldown is halved)
Looks:
A white aura and an aura sword on his right side, a black aura and a magic cannon on his left side, and a grey aura between it.
His hair was black on the right side, and white on the left side.
Cost: 20% of stamina, duration 20 seconds
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llected, Arvine combined into a new form, the Ultima Version!
Immune to any Magical attack, character's speed and power are drastically increased.
Ultimate Skills:
Heaven's Overdrive- Overdrive the Dragon Merge, allowing Arvine to gain tremendous speed .
Chaotic Rampage- Goes berserk, unleash a terrible roar that deafened any enemy, and increased Arvine's power greatly.
Seal Release(Passive)- Allow Arvine to cast all Special Skill without any cooldown.
Yin n' Yang-(Summon Technique)(Duration of skill = 20 seconds)(Cast time=5 seconds)
Summons Twin of Destiny, Yin is a master hit-woman using her magical cannon, while Yang is a skilled dual-wielding swordsinger.

Hellfire Barrage(Yin)-
Summon 4 individual magical cannon on her sides, Yin unleash a hellfire barrage of magic using her own individual cannons.
Dancing Whirlwind(Yang)-
Summon 8 blades around his sides, Yang sang and danced with his swords creating a whirlwind that cuts anything on his path.

(Spells doesn't have cooldown)
Looks:
Same as Light & Chaos version, but with a bigger and more intense aura.
Cost: 50% of stamina, duration 40 seconds
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Weakness:

-Human weakness
-Arvine are easily convinced, and he will reduce his power if you're not a Forsaken.
-Stamina, each of Dragon Merge and spells needs stamina, and each time using it, Arvine's stamina is reduced.
-Stamina counts for stats, for example:
90% stamina have a speed and power reduction of 10%
80% stamina have a speed and power reduction of 20%
-If stamina reached 0%, Arvine will faint
-For the Ultima version, Arvine needs an extreme focus, and can only be gained after 1 minute of the battle.
-After the Ultima, his stamina will be severely depleted, and you can defeat him if you survive the Ultima.
-He have a slower speed more than most people, justified since he have a pouch and stick handy with him.
-He is prone to emotions, and usually his emotions can affect his spell casting and conjurations.

Personality

Arvine was an outgoing person, and a cheerful happy-go-lucky kid.
Always moving around, he likes to poke things that NOT his business.
Importantly, is he loves to drink some alcohol, mostly wine. He never gets drunk, though.
It's one of the ironic part, when his name was one of the famous wines in the world.

Apart from his love of wines, Arvine also love to meet new people.
He always liked to make friends, and everyone was happy to meet him.
However, that changes during combat......

Combat Mode:
When Arvine in combat, his personality turns cold.
He will try to kill you if you resisted being knocked out, and he will ask a question.
"Are you a Forsaken or not?"
If you are, he will try his best to kill you, and he will make sure you die. At best you will survive with heavy injuries.
If you don't, he will just try to make you unconscious or a near-death status. Unless you still try to resist.

Appearance

Weapon: A metallic meric staff.(A.K.A Ragnovic, the Artifact)
Gender: Male
Age= 11 years old
Height= 1.28 Metres
Weight= 34 Kilograms
He has a bit long hair, and a small bang that covered his right eye, and a short, very short ponytail on back pf his head.
His hair color was naturally black, but changes color during Dragon Merge.
His eyes are black, and will change during the transition of a Dragon Merge.
His skin color are between white to light brown, albeit his color are pretty much in the middle of it.
And he usually wear a torn-out magical cloak, and he loves to use some short pants with a casual light-weight shirt.
Often, his uniqueness is from his rucksack, which his belongings are kept with.
He always carry it, no matter where and when. It's part of his life, as a traveling mage.

History:
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s, his mother was named Jaina.
His father, Fransesco, left him when he was in the womb.
During his birth, several occurences happened.

-In the stable, horses attacked each other
-In the sky, birds are falling, and in the ground, they're singing.
-And in the sea, many animals are eating each other.
-And in some cases, some animals say the word.....

"Electus! Electus! Electus!"

And when Arvine was born, the cloud was thundering, and rain was falling.

At the age of 5, Arvine was considered a prodigy.
He learned his first spell at age 6, and many childrens of the village admired him.
In age 8, he learned most spells on his village.
And in age 10, he became one of the village elders.
However, all of that changes during late summer.

A group of warriors, called the Forsaken, raided his village.
All the people died, but Arvine survived.
But when he saw the man leading them, he feels a dejavu from him.

In the autumn, Arvine decided to took revenge.
He make his own small troops, and raided a compound of the Forsaken's
He then, found his father, the divison leader of the Forsaken.
He battled him, and won, and then his father gave him something.
It's called Dragon's Soul, and it holds the soul of dragons.
His father have the Fire Dragons's soul, and the Black Dragon's soul.
He told Arvine, that the Forsaken must not get their hands on these artifacts.
And then, a the artifact glowed, and a seeping power entered Arvine.
He has Dragon Merged with the Dragon's Soul, and determined that the Forsaken musn't get it.
He have a nemesis called Baritone, a division leader of Forsaken's, and a rival in battle called Tyrande.

A year later, Arvine found 6 Dragon's soul, 2 from his dad, and 4 created by him.
This is the list:
Fire Dragon's Soul
Lightning Dragon's Soul
Frost Dragon's Soul
Black Dragon's Soul
Light Dragon's Soul
Chaos Dragon's Soul

He have a nemesis called Baritone, a retarded division leader of Forsaken's, who know the power of his artifacts.
Also he have a rival in battle, called Tyrande, a master bow-enchatress.
With the enemies aside, another division leader also have battled, survived, and always tried to take revenge on him, called Tenor.

Then, he learned a rumor, that in a large tournament called wRHG, there is hidden members of the Forsaken.
And he determined to find out......
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DEMOS:

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It was a wicked and a wild wind. The crowd cheer’s can be heard over the distance. It’s not far, but close enough for a smiling boy to hear the overwhelming passion of the audience. He almost can see the blood of the warriors that fight for their lives. Chances are, he would die here, and his journey ends, or he will find a clue to what he’s searching for.

Arvine relinquished his smile, and turned his mouth to a nervous grin. More likely, he never thought that his final lead would land him here, in a circle of crowd. Over 3 hours, he waited for the gates to open, and inside of it, he would finally enter the arena. And this fight is not for joke. He knew this town’s reputation of each warrior. Not a pleasant one, especially that he was sweating just by taking a look at the gates.

And all his waiting is finally over. His heart jumped a beat when a blast of noise echoed in the air. He glanced over the gates, saw the iron bars rising to the top, beside the pillars of limestone that creates the foundation of the town’s architecture. It was standing still, solid like a brick, but beneath it, he can almost feel the heart of the architect engraved upon it. Wonderful. Another reason to be nervous of this town.

Making each step countful, the boy started to race to the gates. He knows the idea of volunteer battles is,“Register first, Battles Later.” Not many people know the meaning, but when he overheard someone in the pub, he knows he must be fast. It has a simple meaning, that the person on the top of the list would battle last, and the one at the bottom would be the first fighter to face his enemy. And you know what they say, that you can always practice before your fight started.

Arriving, he only saw 3 people on the registry. Regretting stepping on a pebble, he took his place on the back, while more people came rushing in. “Good”, thought himself. He would be able to practice before his fight. He drew a little breath, only to find a person on his back, laughing and pointing at him. He knows the routine of people that underestimated him, and he felt a slight rage inside his chest.

“Next please!”

“Oh, yes sir!”

Stepping forward, he felt a pang of feeling in his chest. He hasn’t fight for 2 months ever since the incident. And no, he definitely don’t want to remember it. Looking back, he saw the people in the line. Each of them must have a face that had seen many battles. Yet here he is, standing beside them. A heartbeat started to explode in his chest, adrenaline rushing in the blood. But he quickly slapped his mind back to where it belongs, and he spoke the words of his name.

“Name is Arvine, sir!”, gulped Arvine. Not a good start.

“Ok, gender, age, and occupation please.”

“Uhm.” He needed to think for a while. He don’t want to lie, but he need to find another lead, or nothing will change. Mind swirling for a brief second, he stopped for a moment, remembering a trick that some people told to him.

“Male, Teenager and occupation is mage!”

“So, a mage. No problem there. Male, well, most magicians are female, but what’s the big difference anyway? But your face, it looks like 10 years old...”

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Feb 9, 2013 12:00 PM #878037
nice.where did you get that hilarious name?
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Feb 9, 2013 12:22 PM #878046
Better get that demo fast or this thread will be closed :/
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Feb 9, 2013 3:07 PM #878150
>.> the time writing differences make me confused. I thought that by 12/02/2013 you meant december 2nd, 2013.
But this is a cool wRHG
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Feb 9, 2013 3:52 PM #878188
Ok, seriously, what's with all this video game stuff lately? I mean, really, it's getting a little out of hand...
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Feb 9, 2013 3:56 PM #878193
Quote from Hewitt
I think its cos the sudden influx of writers are coming from the Stick Empires section.


That explains so much, yet it still saddens me.

Edit: I'm being a dick about this. Triss, this is a nice concept, but some of theb abilities are a bit OP, and though you explain them in a neat technical manner, the descriptions aren't very good for writing battles. This may just be my opinion of course, but why not explain them as if you were watching them rather than strategizing a siege on an enemy and needed to plan several steps out? Battles are supposed to just flow, with all kinds of uncertainties based on your opponent's skills, your skills, and environment. I just don't see how that'd work as this is now.
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Feb 9, 2013 5:34 PM #878329
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Better get that demo fast or this thread will be closed :/

I have made the demo! You better read it!

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That explains so much, yet it still saddens me.

Why are you sad?

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>.> the time writing differences make me confused. I thought that by 12/02/2013 you meant december 2nd, 2013.
But this is a cool wRHG

Thanks! I spent a whole day to think about it's abilities.
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Feb 9, 2013 5:43 PM #878339
Edited post.
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Feb 9, 2013 5:47 PM #878347
Quote from Shaq-of-All-Trades
Edited post.

How can I make the demo if I don't edit it?
P.S:I added some new abilities :p
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Feb 9, 2013 5:50 PM #878350
I meant I edited my post.
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Feb 9, 2013 5:53 PM #878352
Quote from Shaq-of-All-Trades
I meant I edited my post.

Oh ok. I will edit the post for it's OPness.
And sorry for misunderstanding you :p
Any way I wanna see your wRHG too!(So I can compare my words with yours)
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Feb 9, 2013 6:03 PM #878361
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?48890-Flipside

If you want, we can battle too.
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Feb 9, 2013 6:12 PM #878368
Quote from Shaq-of-All-Trades
Edited post.


SE writers are comin yea XD i saw the start of this era
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Feb 9, 2013 6:25 PM #878380
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SE writers are comin yea XD i saw the start of this era

Well you haven't made any wRHG yet right jomblo?
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Feb 9, 2013 6:56 PM #878409
i wouldnt