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The Kid and the City

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Feb 16, 2013 9:05 PM #886162
Yeah haven't made a stick pic in a while:
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Enjoy and cnc faggots...
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Feb 16, 2013 10:22 PM #886202
Nice job
I really like the background and the texture. And the light shine effect isn't bad either.
The only problem I have is the gradient, not the placement it's the color, I think it differs too much from the highlight to the shading.
And also there's no shading besides, the subtle coloration between his eyes.
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Feb 16, 2013 10:49 PM #886208
It's good!
The shadow at the back of the stickman is kinda off though.
And the eyes remind me of CaM's style.idk why lol
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Feb 16, 2013 11:11 PM #886220
Thanx for feedback and cnc guys!

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And the eyes remind me of CaM's style.idk why lol

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Feb 17, 2013 4:22 PM #886912
These clouds, I must learn how to make them.
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Feb 17, 2013 5:09 PM #886972
Its really smooth I like it
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Feb 17, 2013 5:57 PM #887024
As previously stated, the shading is slightly off. It seems like his body is being affected by light in two spots, and his head produces shadows somehow. I also noticed that the head and arm on the right don't really merge with the body very well (there are still lines). Still, it is quite a good piece of stick art.

The background is beautiful urbanscape though. And those clouds are mucho, mucho sexy.
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Feb 17, 2013 9:08 PM #887148
I feel like the arms are in a very awkward position in relation to his body pose. He looks off balance, and while the sun is in the background, his shadow is pointing the wrong way.

I like the color choices though and the background itself looks pretty cool.
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