My College Submission

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Feb 22, 2013 4:15 AM #891972

This is my college acceptance video submission.
Requirements were to be 2 minutes in length, and be based around the theme of submissions of "orange"
Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, any suggestions on how I can improve this before the 27th would be awesome!
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Feb 22, 2013 8:53 AM #892107
Shut up faggot
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Feb 22, 2013 11:54 AM #892217
That last "Kunts" scrabble
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Feb 22, 2013 3:52 PM #892407
What does that have to do with orange? Sorry but I don't really get it. It's more of an explanatory of video about why you're an artist and so.
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Feb 22, 2013 5:21 PM #892480
Do you mean the company Orange?
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Feb 22, 2013 9:23 PM #892685
Quote from Ahmad9383
What does that have to do with orange? Sorry but I don't really get it. It's more of an explanatory of video about why you're an artist and so.


Youre allowed to take the theme in whichever way youd like.
Orange is a color, color is a big part of art, so I did it on art.
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Feb 22, 2013 11:38 PM #892828
You dont look nine to me.

But seriously heres some CC, Take off the douchebag cap.
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Feb 23, 2013 12:01 AM #892843
Well art is art. Pretty Good, For now
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Feb 23, 2013 12:06 AM #892846
Quote from Pox
You dont look nine to me.

But seriously heres some CC, Take off the douchebag cap.


Wow what amazing constructive criticism. It's not him in the video considering he made the video for a college submission you stupid twat. Good job 10/10
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Feb 23, 2013 12:18 AM #892856
Quote from Pox
You dont look nine to me.

But seriously heres some CC, Take off the douchebag cap.


I found this very helpful
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Feb 23, 2013 12:20 AM #892858
Thanks.
I tend to help in anyway I can.
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Feb 23, 2013 9:17 PM #894089
What college is this for?

And I like how you subliminally placed the orange colored marker in some of your scenes. That was creative... You should have the color orange hidden somewhere in every scene... that'll drive the point home XD
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Feb 25, 2013 11:13 AM #896433
Quote from kungfunub
What college is this for?

And I like how you subliminally placed the orange colored marker in some of your scenes. That was creative... You should have the color orange hidden somewhere in every scene... that'll drive the point home XD


Sheridan College, and he didn't actually mean to have the orange marker placed. He didn't notice until after.
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Feb 25, 2013 4:50 PM #896795
Looked pretty cool, thought the letters in the end were a bit out of place though.

Hope you get accepted.
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Feb 25, 2013 6:23 PM #896861
hey that wasn't bad at all! great job! and best of luck!!