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Mar 14, 2013 8:19 AM #914649
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Name: ???

Alias: Pluto

Gender: female

Age: 17 on a document, in reality she lost count (she is lying)

Story:
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born and raised in "our world", but one day, a serious earthquake broke out where she lived, and Pluto was sucked into the deep chasm that opened to a bizarre dimension that connected the whole universe. This dimension, the "portal", saw Pluto as interference, and tried to pulverize her very being before she causes any harm to it by applying a unique "stress". Pluto's case, the stress was the "truth". Hovering in the nothingness, the "truth" flowed into her like an invisible force trying to squeeze the juice out of her. But just before "portal" did a wonderful job of erasing her from the world, Pluto managed to do something very cunning: using the "truth" she had just acquired, she escaped from the "portal", and fell into the world where she has never been before. But she did not have any time to enjoy the view. As ordinary as she was, her body was not strong enough to contain all the "truth" she has been shown. Writhing in pain, Pluto's mind snapped, and her instincts took over: she needed a stronger body in order to withhold this curse.

Pluto lost her sanity at this point, and turned into a monster herself, using her newly gained curse as a guideline to survive and kill. Her main targets were dragons, which were known as the strongest creatures in the world she fell into, and she started with little hatchlings, consuming the source of their power, dragon hearts to gain strength. She carved a dagger out of the fang of a hatchling that she first killed. Pluto simply abused her intelligence; during ten years, she killed off a quarter of dragon population. By then, black reptilian scales covered her body, like thin layers of obsidian shaped into armor, and she grew talons and wings that resembled those of dragons. Pluto didn't age anymore, for her physique was more dragon-like than human-like. She dared to cross the line to test her power - she challenged a minor god that guarded the godly forest and killed him. The gods were furious of what she had done, so they sent the gods' executor, "Cathory", to punish her, but unfortunately, Pluto and Cathory's strength were on par, so their fight dragged on until gods realized that they needed to step in.

As intelligent as Pluto was, she was not omnipotent. She was caught and dragged into the presence of gods, bound in place like a helpless dog. For punishing someone from another dimension was forbidden, the gods attempted to erase the "truth" from her instead. But it was an ability given to her by the world, therefore impossible to undo it or suppress it no matter how hard they tried.

In the end, gods came up with an alternate solution. Cathory was to retire from her position as a executor and become Pluto's guardian and companion, and to fill the place of the god Pluto had killed, they were assigned to his post - the Forest of Dimensions. In addition, in order to prevent Pluto from going berserk again, they decided to put a restraint on her so that Pluto won't lose control. Pluto and Cathory were ordered to adopt orphaned hatchlings and take care of them, while putting the same markings on the hatchlings so that Pluto could channel and balance out her power through them. This was a way for her to repent her crimes, too - well; she did wipe out quarter of the dragon population. Pluto's personality was twisted through this incident, but she eventually calmed down.

Now Pluto is peacefully living in a house - or mansion or cave or whatever her family calls it - under this "tainted orchard", with hundreds of sons and daughters. Or will she?


"So this is where I end up: a tainted orchard."
"It is not an orchard. This place is the Forest of Dimensions, and each of these trees represents each dimension--"
"Yeah, yeah, whatever you say Cathory."
"By the way, I am getting tired of addressing you as "you" or "hey" all the time. You got a name?"
"I forgot. Well, I know it, but it does not feel like my name. Why are names important anyways? No, wait. Don't answer. I know that you can make a three hour speech on that topic."
"You seem to know me well now. So, name?"
"Hmm... Since we are the people living under tainted orchard, let's abbreviate that and stick to 'Pluto'."
""People"? Not dragons?"
"I am not a full dragon to start with, and there is no way I am choosing Dluto as my name."
"Fine. Pluto it is, then."
"You are not gonna argue this time about the "orchard" thing?"
"Shut up, Pluto."


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Abilities, Weaknesses and Weapons:
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Height: 150cm, 5'0"

Weight: 48kg, 106lbs


Appearance:
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of brown that flows down to her waist. She almost always puts it up in a neat ponytail, but she gets lazy sometimes and will put her hair down. Her eyes are deep brown almost like her hair, and seem as if she is looking far away. They are slightly slanted upwards, giving her a feline feature. Pluto looks like she is sulking all the time because of the way her lips are shaped. Her canine teeth are very pointy. (No, she is not a vampire.) Pluto has an Asian-like feature, but is rather pale and doesn't tan no matter how hard she tries. Although Pluto is far from words like "sexy" or "glamorous", she is cute in a way and has a slim body. She seriously lacks fashion sense; Pluto hates - almost loathes dresses and skirts, therefore will only wear pair of jeans with hoodie and sneakers. Pluto has great eyesight, but she always wears a silver-rimmed glasses. She seems quite attached to them. Pluto also carries a dagger on her waist, specially crafted by her.

When she takes on a dragon form, black tail and wings will grow, and her forearms will turn into vicious talons. Pluto's eyes resemble those of reptiles at this point, with whites turning black and iris turning into indigo blue. (Same color as her stick figure color, #2C2566) Her pupils will turn into narrow slits just like what happens to cats when they step into the bright surroundings. A maroon-colored tattoo appears on her body during this form: this "tattoo" looks like there is a vine crawling up and around her limbs and neck.

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Personality & Traits:
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onality, it will shift crazily from one end to the other. Due to her experience in the "portal", Pluto lost part of her sanity; think of a overloaded computer that is just about to crash. Yes, Pluto is at the very edge of that moment. As a self-defense, she developed this sadistic and psychotic ego, merciless and sinister. She does feel a sense of guilt, but refuses to recognize it. Pluto justifies that she has gone through worse. On the other hand, she is, or was a surprisingly quiet girl who is mature and wise. Pluto is, or was a warm mother figure that anyone can rely on. This part of her personality acts as an innocent mask to make others to underestimate her. When engaging in battles she wears a crazy grin, giggling away as if she is watching a funny comedy show. She is, rather unpredictable. One good thing about her persona is that she is an optimistic, easygoing character that does not hold grudges against others.

On a side note, do not disturb her when she is zoned out; she will either metaphorically or literally bite you. She spends most of her time in this state, trying to sort out the "truth" in her mind; since the world is infinite, even to this day, she is sorting. She would categorize them and file them away like putting books away in the library. It is like a way for her to reflect on herself and see ahead.

She has an accent of somewhere between American and British. It is easy to predict whether Pluto is in a good mood or not because she will start speaking faster and faster in a British accent when she is agitated. She addresses others as "Oi" or "Yo" or "Hey" often, making her sound rude - don't be offended though, Pluto just isn't good with names. She has a complex about her height; ever since she froze in time, Pluto's appearance never changed even a bit. She is probably shorter than most of the people she battles with, so it will give her an access to lower body parts, but at the same time, she will have a blind spot for anything above her eyesight - considering her "truth" ability, it wouldn't be a blind spot, but Pluto won't be able to dodge some it even if she knows. Pluto has a short stride, therefore trots around to catch up with others when walking.

Pluto is mildly addicted to caffeine - she won't last the day without drinking at least a cup of coffee. She will drink soft drinks time to time, but it does not seem to suit her taste. She cannot stand eating something too salty or too sweet - Pluto consumes chocolate once in a while for extra calories, but that is pretty much it. Why she decided to join RHG is unknown, but it seems as though she has a great sponsor.

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Demo:
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e Forest of Dimensions. Pluto lay on a living room couch watching her children come and go, greeting them with a blank face and a usual sulk. Her children and even Cathory knew not to disturb Pluto when she was at this state, so Pluto was "preserved" in a same position for hours and hours, making her seemingly lethargic. Part of it was true. She was utterly lazy at times, spending her days daydreaming about what no one wanted to know. But this half-sleeping moment was important to her, since Pluto used this time to collect her thoughts and organize her "truth". When one of her children - he had quite a nerve to ask her that - asked her why she needed that time, Pluto simply replied, "My mind is like an office overflowing with documents; if I don't sort them out, they will be a useless junk."

So there she was, staring into nothing while her mind was racing like a maniac. But her trance ended abruptly, for something important sprang into her mind.

"Oi, Cath,"

Pluto called out of the blue, stopping Cathory from walking past the couch where Pluto was lying. She seemed to have snapped back to reality now. A wide grin spread on her face while she sat up to face the brunette dragon lady. Cathory gulped at Pluto's expression; her grin was almost mischievous, like a small child trying to pull a prank on somebody. She knew exactly what Pluto wanted from her when she smiled like that. When Pluto finished her sentence, Cathory couldn't help but sigh at her psychotic companion.

"Let's spar."



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"Oh, lovely dog days."
"It is not even that hot."
"Hmm? No, I mean I feel shitty like a dog - not a reference to hot seasons."

Standing in the middle of the sparring ring, Cathory glared at Pluto, who was staring at the far end corner with her dagger dangling carelessly in her hand. "Pluto," she started to complain, "it is not sensible to pour everything out on me just because you are having a crappy day." At this, the girl's black eyes bore into her, as if digging deep into her mind. Pluto's blank expression turned into an innocent face of a child.

"No?"

"No," Cathory confirmed. But as far as she knew, Pluto did not care. Instead she countered, "Does that mean I can dump this shitty mood on someone else?" Lost in words, Cathory rubbed her temples. This girl wasn't just crazy - she also had a way of going around the words effectively. When the dragoness did not reply, Pluto let out a low chuckle, and positioned herself like a cat just about to pounce on its prey. Her permanent frown was distorted into a smile that sent a chill down the spine, and her eyes sparked back to life. Pluto closed in without a warning, her ivory dagger making a intimidating curve just as Cathory stepped out of its path.

"At least tell me when it starts, will you?"
"It's not like you can't dodge it-- Fine. Start!"

When Cathory shot a glance at her, Pluto pouted and resumed the fight. As Pluto jumped back, Cathory summoned her own weapon - claymore with ancient runes engraved on its blade - and poised for an atta
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Mar 14, 2013 8:27 AM #914654
Wow, this is a really good wRHG bro. I see potential in you.
Yours are very detailed, and I like it.
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Mar 14, 2013 9:32 AM #914671
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Heh. Nice to see someone decent for once.


I know right?
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Mar 14, 2013 12:18 PM #914729
I feel jealous right now.
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Mar 14, 2013 1:54 PM #914784
Cool character. I´m looking forward to read your first battle :D
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Mar 14, 2013 5:51 PM #914952
Hmm another sword wielder, I find much potential in you, but the only true potential will be found on the battle field.

Care to fight the armored king, Dragonoid?

My powers:
Impervious armor and weaponry
Skilled with blades
Usually has 3 footmen around as body guards
A priest holding antidotes and a single healing potion
Magical enchantments to the sword making it become faster with each sucessful slash and sharper with blood on the blade
Magical enchantments on the shield to make it air resistant so the character can charge faster and magical enchantments to make the shield become extremely Light while keeping its armor class
Anti darkness magic on all weaponry (including the footmen)

Want more info take a gander at my page: http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?52177-Zeus-the-immortal-king-%28third-times-the-charm-%29
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Mar 15, 2013 9:20 AM #915582
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He doesn't have a large picture like urs does

.-. It's hard to draw when it's size is 150x150.
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Mar 15, 2013 10:14 AM #915599
Hope you return quickly Pluto-kun anyways your wRhg was very detailed as i think(I hope me too)and the etc nice for me it was very detailed :(.
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Mar 15, 2013 10:19 AM #915605
awesome RHG! Its so detailed
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Mar 15, 2013 12:50 PM #915652
Man he ran away right when I when I challenged him, I seriously want to fight this person, I don't even care if I lose or win.
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Mar 15, 2013 8:23 PM #916004
Thank you everyone for encouraging comments!
And kingkickass2013, I did not run away.
This Greece trip was planned two years ago, you know.
Put me on your hit list, and we shall see who prevails after I come back.
Apparently, I did not bring my laptop and wifi sucks at the place I am staying.
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Mar 15, 2013 8:46 PM #916028
Our battle will be grand.

A god vs an immortal king, WHO SHALT WIN.

Where do you want to be on my hitlist, last of first?
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Mar 15, 2013 9:02 PM #916045
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Our battle will be grand.

A god vs an immortal king, WHO SHALT WIN.

Where do you want to be on my hitlist, last of first?


Somewhere in the middle would be nice, since you have like three people on your hit list that you haven't fought yet.
Also, on a side note, Pluto isn't a godling; she has killed one, but that does not meam she became a god.
Pluto is... well, she just lives long, and is stronger than average people.
She is more of a half-human, half-dragon.

Put something like "she appeared out of nowhere and intruded his kingdom" or something along those lines for the reason.
She would love to visit - and possibly cause trouble at - Zeus' kingdom :D
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Mar 15, 2013 9:10 PM #916054
Or perhaps rein destruction upon my beautiful village.
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Mar 21, 2013 11:52 AM #921440
Wow. The detail and effort you put into this is absolutely astounding! I think you may have covered every possible thing you could! Great job!
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