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Name: Faziri

colour body: #000000

Wepons: she have poison red power and the wooden axe to kill the people

About: she is only a little and pretty girl, she never die before

weakness: sry and pretty person

story: Faziri was give birth in the long ago the old hunted house, but faziri is 3 years old her parents die. faziri is very sad and crying. one day, faziri find her big bother call he fazara. he is 15 years old. he is olso hunted moster, they faziri say the quesion for her big bother "hey bother long time no see" faziri awser, fazara say 'long time no see too my littie sister" he awser back. 4 years after, her big bother is dead in 20 years old. she is very angry for look for her big bother. faziri 12 years old to kill her hunted friends, she is very have something bad things for her mother die before. she is become want to killing all eneimes and eneny now. after 50 years after, she is very sad for her farther, mother and her big bother and she joined RHG.

I just making start again because my rhg charater is locked :(

Faziri Axe:


Demo: http://www.fileize.com/view/45f6202d-1fa/

i think u would want to make ur demo a .swf

I do not think that you've made the demo. It is very unlikely to be your creation.

well great, now it s up again c:

put image like this quick

Quote from Lionell

Looking nice. Maybe sometimes you could teach me to draw a hair?
And for the story, maybe you should check your spelling and grammar, then decreasing the amount of useless details (such as crying on death, everybody do that) and for the wooden axe, I like the bloods. Reminds me of Left 4 Dead somehow. Just... try to delete that blood, which is getting out of the axe.
That's all.

i drew that pic for her, and she doesn't really speak english that well, so there nothing she can do about that,
i'm helping her so it wont get lock again

Quote from KuChannel

I do not think that you've made the demo. It is very unlikely to be your creation.

yes i made that demo for here because her old one needed some stuff :)
http://www.fileize.com/view/0075ccca-b06/

Quote from Hewitt

Those are some mighty words. Do you have proof to back up that statement?

I think so, but I dunno if the proof is presented for better or worse.

Edit:

Quote from Mark XD

yes i made that demo for here because her old one needed some stuff
http://www.fileize.com/view/0075ccca-b06/

This demo is seen to have a few "boxes", could simply change the color of the frame, "with" frame. "Obviously not contain many, which will be easy.

Thread closed.

Make your own demo. If you can't even make a demonstration of your character, then there's no reason to expect you to finish an actual animation when someone challenges you.

Once you make a demo, PM a mod and this thread will be unlocked.