Hey Guys I've Make This Animation As A Practice , So I'll Give You The .Fla
And Cnc Please :D And Tell Me If It Helps You :D

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its nice to see that have understand the way of making effects, easy as squeeze right? :D

Haha Not Really !! It Tooked About 4 Hours To Make This !! It's Just A Matter Of Making Things Getting Smaller
And The Pressure on The Brush Tool Make Things Easier, I Wish I Had It :P

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Haha Not Really !! It Tooked About 4 Hours To Make This !! It's Just A Matter Of Making Things Getting Smaller
And The Pressure on The Brush Tool Make Things Easier, I Wish I Had It :P

yeah yeah yeah, i know how to do this shizz already u know :D

Yeah Sure !! And The Ground Crack :S The Most TTerrible Thing !! And Have You Noticed Some Of The Rocks ComingOut Of The Ground ?

Choppy as hell, but the effects themselves weren't bad

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Choppy as hell, but the effects themselves weren't bad

Choopy , Hmmm I Can't See Were It's Chooped !! o.O

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Yeah Sure !! And The Ground Crack :S The Most TTerrible Thing !! And Have You Noticed Some Of The Rocks ComingOut Of The Ground ?

yeah, i noticed, it was good, for u, nice job :)

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Choppy as hell, but the effects themselves weren't bad

oh yeah, like ur wind tunnel animation, i don't think u should criticize if u can't do better, leave that for the pros, cause u r around the same level as him and would probably do the same

Hardcore CnC time, get ready.

It is indeed choppy as hell. The animation doesn't really flow together well at all, mainly because the movement of limbs aren't in a consistent arc or line. I'm going to guess your using a slow framerate or just double framing a lot, and that's fine, if you can make it flow. Otherwise, up the fps a bit. While I'm talking about movement, I also want to mention the manner in which the feet slide apart when he crouches. Feet don't do that, lol--one always has to be there to anchor the rest of the body. Anyway, my favorite part of this animation was the flip, though from what I can tell it was lazily done (free-transformed around a few times?). The effects, which were clearly the focus of this animation, weren't really that great, since the lightning in his hand was really just a looping movie-clip with jagged lines emitting from it and a yellow glow. Examine the properties of something if you want to do an effect on it. It has to flow properly. Same this with the lightning particles at the end; their direction of movement didn't flow. They didn't follow much of a smooth arc, and kind of went in multiple inconsistent directions till the end.

It's pretty good for what you succeeded in though, and altogether the main issue is flow. Good luuuuuck

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oh yeah, like ur wind tunnel animation, i don't think u should criticize if u can't do better, leave that for the pros, cause u r around the same level as him and would probably do the same

Everyone has the right to criticize regardless of their skill level you know

He's not being an ass for no reason lmao

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Hardcore CnC time, get ready.

It is indeed choppy as hell. The animation doesn't really flow together well at all, mainly because the movement of limbs aren't in a consistent arc or line. I'm going to guess your using a slow framerate or just double framing a lot, and that's fine, if you can make it flow. Otherwise, up the fps a bit. While I'm talking about movement, I also want to mention the manner in which the feet slide apart when he crouches. Feet don't do that, lol--one always has to be there to anchor the rest of the body. Anyway, my favorite part of this animation was the flip, though from what I can tell it was lazily done (free-transformed around a few times?). The effects, which were clearly the focus of this animation, weren't really that great, since the lightning in his hand was really just a looping movie-clip with jagged lines emitting from it and a yellow glow. Examine the properties of something if you want to do an effect on it. It has to flow properly. Same this with the lightning particles at the end; their direction of movement didn't flow. They didn't follow much of a smooth arc, and kind of went in multiple inconsistent directions till the end.

It's pretty good for what you succeeded in though, and altogether the main issue is flow. Good luuuuuck

Haha , It Feels Like If My Mom Were Punishing Me !! lol.
Well Where To Start ,, So THE FLOW , Your Guess Was Right I Use 12 FPS, I Never Deared To Overcross It , But I Think I Will After My Battle .
The Reaction , Well The Sliding Of The Legs Wasn't That Much You Can See It Only If You Focused On It !,THE EFFECTS:
Well This Is The First Time I Do Some Effects !! And I Like To Do Things The Easy Way !! I Don't Have To Bother.
EDIT: And Here Is The Animation With 20 FPS http://filz.us/t6S Flow Enough ?

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Everyone has the right to criticize regardless of their skill level you know

He's not being an ass for no reason lmao

yeah, but if u tell someone, thet their anim is bull shit, and then not tell them what they did wrong and how to improve it, then whats the sense of the comment, its not helping anyone
understand me now? :0

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Haha , It Feels Like If My Mom Were Punishing Me !! lol.
Well Where To Start ,, So THE FLOW , Your Guess Was Right I Use 12 FPS, I Never Deared To Overcross It , But I Think I Will After My Battle .
The Reaction , Well The Sliding Of The Legs Wasn't That Much You Can See It Only If You Focused On It !,THE EFFECTS:
Well This Is The First Time I Do Some Effects !! And I Like To Do Things The Easy Way !! I Don't Have To Bother.
EDIT: And Here Is The Animation With 20 FPS http://filz.us/t6S Flow Enough ?

Okay so, The point of community animations is to post animations and for people to reply back in criticism. CaM was just trying to help you, you cant get better if you don't know whats wrong. You really should be thanking him and try not to make so many excuses.

The reason he can't just say "Yay good job!" is because you would not improve at all

It may hurt, but they post cnc to help you improve

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yeah, but if u tell someone, thet their anim is bull shit, and then not tell them what they did wrong and how to improve it, then whats the sense of the comment, its not helping anyone
understand me now? :0

Yeah Mark is Right shoulden't you help new members and encourdge them? :(

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FUCK

And What's The Matter With You ?

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He gave you the truth! :|

Truth Suck :p