Gonna get to making necessary edits tomorrow @-@ school has left me busy busy busy. Might write another chapter in Solutum's demo, reveal the unknown parts of his past with this twin like Crimson Jack.
Gonna have the second chapter of the demo out tomorrow :3 wonder if I might get a challenge soon? Definitely have the time for it now that testing is over, dear god did that blow blazing lead. Yea I rhymed, what'cha gonna do about it?
After my battle with the one formerly known as Bond84, as well as my battle with Crank, I'll consider giving you a ring. Don't worry, I'm sure it'll come sooner rather than later.
I would love to battle you but I am busy atm.
One thing I noticed, there is a lot of run-on to me.
Example: "To perform any alchemy at all Solutum needs to concentrate meaning he can't be dodging attacks while attempting to change his daggers' or armor's composition or attempting any other alchemy."
I think there should be something (most likely a comma) after "concentrate". It feels like two ideas jammed together to create one.
Argh I've been gone, sorry I disappeared people. I promise to get in to the wRHG game. So how have you all been? Since school is almost over you can expect me to finally fight, oh and I have two wRHG's in mind! So expect that.