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Apr 3, 2013 12:08 AM #935639
i like the first link it wa really cool and entertaining nice job but the second link could really use some work like add more but it's good yeah i don't have my rhg up yet cause alot got in the way but i know alot about rhg battles and demos but this is cool
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Apr 3, 2013 12:27 AM #935654
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It ties into what Jeff has said in this thread. it's not mandatory, but it does give off a sense of repetitive quality.
Yes, it doesn't really effect the score on BSE; but people will say after a while of showing updates "ughhh, I already saw this."
It's bittersweet and a real spoil to what could have been a good experience if you already saw it.
But that's already been addressed with that thread; let's stay focused on the anims at hand.

Well I bet the judges would have enough sense, to maybe, not look at too much of Yun's spoilers. Because they probably foresaw the same thing.

I would guess they probably did.

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And again, you don't have to watch it. No one is forcing you to watch what he links, watch something else, its not hard.
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Apr 3, 2013 12:28 AM #935655
well you need some break time,. and do something new!
you guys want to talk this right?
maybe.
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Apr 3, 2013 1:01 AM #935676
bravo yun!
keep at it!

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Apr 3, 2013 1:26 AM #935711
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Well, correct me if Im wrong, but him showing his BSE early wont do shit to his score.I mean, Its not like you are graded on how much times you showed your animation.The only bad thing I see is that if the judges look at this, then they already have a good idea on the score they would give you, unless the animation is polished until that time.

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Actually it might, by a lot
Think of it this way. You lose that umpf.
If i see an awesome animation, i'm like "WOW!!" I see it againg. "WOW!" again "wow" again "cool" again "meh" again "meeeeeh" again "Its a bit old"
Say the judges have seen this alot of times. They won't be as suprised by the outcome and may have a lower vote because it doesn't look as amazing as if he had shown it and no one had ever saw it.

Both animations were nice.
Not too big of a pony fan, but the animation takes serious talent, especially using only flash. Lot's of time and work and i commend you.
Also, I like the animation in the BSE, with the colored in full body outside the lines. I like that.

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And again, you don't have to watch it. No one is forcing you to watch what he links, watch something else, its not hard.


No one knows what he's posting, and it's just a bit, disrespectful to ignore someones thing that they are showing off for you to see. Sure you may not want to, but some people may want the feedback, and to blow it off is just meh to me.
And again, the fileize link doesn't say http://www.fileize.com/view/Yun'sBSERound10/ it has some random numbers and letters so you don't know until the page loads, and by that time, you're curiosity probably set in to see what he wants to show off.
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Apr 3, 2013 1:38 AM #935724
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No one knows what he's posting, and it's just a bit, disrespectful to ignore someones thing that they are showing off for you to see. Sure you may not want to, but some people may want the feedback, and to blow it off is just meh to me.
And again, the fileize link doesn't say http://www.fileize.com/view/Yun'sBSERound10/ it has some random numbers and letters so you don't know until the page loads, and by that time, you're curiosity probably set in to see what he wants to show off.

He stated that the link would direct you to his BSE R10 so far. And also the title to the animation is "BSE V4 R10"
That's more than enough warning to keep you from saying "THIS THING AGAIN?!"
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Apr 3, 2013 2:46 AM #935801
Quote from Mikematic
He stated that the link would direct you to his BSE R10 so far. And also the title to the animation is "BSE V4 R10"
That's more than enough warning to keep you from saying "THIS THING AGAIN?!"


You have a knack for getting into tussles mikematic :P


Nice animations yun.
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Apr 3, 2013 3:26 AM #935856
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gay.


says who? your boyfriend? anyways

i lvoe you for this Yun.. ponys.. oh god that was amazing
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Apr 3, 2013 4:00 AM #935899
The bse was nice and all but I think you should take out the semi-body guy that changes to a stick. I got my hopes up thinking I would see a semi-body from you, but ended up being disappointed seeing primarily stick figures with some tiny movements of semi-body. Good animation nonetheless, just the swap was disappointing. But apparently everyone has already seen it or something so that doesn't matter.

Oh yeah the first one was cool but I don't understand the ponies part. It was this really cool graphics movements and then all the sudden pony walk loops. Like arch angel said it had potential to be more. Also your play button is messed up if you click it while it is fading out it restarts.
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Apr 3, 2013 8:37 AM #936018
Oh my god the first one is so amazing.
You're a professional level animator. I've seen guys with similar skills doing freelance jobs, finish this and try to find someone who wants a music video like that, ask around in other forums.
You're one of the best animators on this site.
This is my reaction from the pony thing, the other way wasn't anything too special.
Don't mind the random hate you got, those people won't reach your level ever and have no idea what they are talking about.
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Apr 3, 2013 11:58 AM #936137
lol ^
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Apr 3, 2013 4:20 PM #936312
Jeez, I thought this was about to go into another clusterfuck of debating and criticism.

Thanks for the feedback, blah blah blah.

The reason why I added ponies in the PMV is because it's a recreation. I'm recreating the original in Flash and also adding a few more effects so that I can better use the properties and effects in my future projects later on.

BSE, yeah I understand now.
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Apr 3, 2013 7:48 PM #936459
For the first one, those effects were just eye-candy. The visuals were very impressive and it definitely brought something new to the table that's set apart from all of your other stuff, Yun. Great job, I like what I see so far.

I can't really say the same for the second animation. Although the angles were good and well thought out, the animation looked a bit lazy and the drop in quality was a bit more apparent compared to your first animation, but I still enjoyed what you had cooked up so far.

All in all, I liked the first animation. But if you can touch up the second one you posted, I'll say the same for what I had said for your first animation because those visuals were very well done.

Keep at it. :D
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Apr 3, 2013 8:45 PM #936505
Quote from Xyper
Oh my god the first one is so amazing.
You're a professional level animator. I've seen guys with similar skills doing freelance jobs, finish this and try to find someone who wants a music video like that, ask around in other forums.
You're one of the best animators on this site.
This is my reaction from the pony thing, the other way wasn't anything too special.
Don't mind the random hate you got, those people won't reach your level ever and have no idea what they are talking about.


Wow dude you really sucked him hard right there.....

But as for the first animation the effects were pretty damn good. Honestly they appear professional leveled to be honest. I wouldn't think twice if i saw it on Tv so good
job on that. Only bad thing is the ponies. Not sure why young men are into MLP now but I'm not a homophobe or anything so I will not complain but I do find it odd and it
sort of messed it up.

Second one seemed to lack force at some moments. Had the potential to be great but it's a lot holding back. You have plenty of crit so I'll leave you to that.
Overall i really enjoyed the 1st without the ponies and the second was alright.
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Apr 4, 2013 4:09 AM #936891
wow man.. the pony thingy is the best lol!! and guys, be a professional, we are all animators. . . having a pony on an animation that is required to have a pony is not gay. . if my boss tells me to animate barbie, i will. . its our job. .
we're illustrators, animators!!! btw nice job yun. .

Cnc
-the effects in the first animation was great and so cartoony^^ good for the concept but still can be improved. .
-i suggest to add more glittering efx because i know kids like that^^
-one thing i dont like is the zooming scene in a blue diamond thingy. . lol idk but i feel it gets the quality lower compared to the 1st efxs. . lol but its just me^^

BSE
-man, honestly. . this is a lazy job. . you're animating for years i know but still i haven't see big improvement
-i think you should stick to stick figures than full body. . you'll realize why. .
-but the consept is great lol keep it up!!

whoever says that yun is a gay,, is the true dick sucker
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