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Claud, feel free to battle!!!!

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Apr 15, 2013 5:14 AM #946699
Claud
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Abilities
Able to control sand with his body, also can turn into sand,Claud can turn sand into an item or structure and also is able to make this item or sturcture solid like rock

Weakness
his weakness is water making him more and more slower

Story
Claud's Story (Click to Show)


Demo
Claud's Demo (Click to Show)


Personality and Appearance

Claud is a teenage boy, very short, he is nice and funny, and he gets angry sometimes and uses his sand unlikely. He has brown hair and has 2 sand gloves, they are both dark brown. He isn't athletic so when he runs he normally takes long steps, so his opponent mostly has and advantage. He is mean when it comes to meeting up with BlackDar(read demo). He has tan colored markings all over his arms, he doesn't know what they are but they glow when ever he moves around the sand.

Status
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Apr 15, 2013 7:19 AM #946754
This character reminds me of Crocodile (apparently watched too much anime)
An interesting gladiator... but you'll need to spice things up;
First, describe your character more - right now, all I can see is that Claud is an orphaned teenage boy with sand abilities, but that is it.
It feels like you just copy&pasted the format and put minimum effort in your character - no offense; this is why I avoid CnC-ing. I get mean.

How did he get his abilities? What is his personality? What does he really look like?

It is good to see that you have a profile picture up there, but what I'd like to see is some words.
As for the story, be more creative. Add more things to it. Have fun tweaking with details.
Finally, the demo - it is 156 words. wRHG demo minimum is 300 words :3
Anything else about his ability that you want to show us?

Show me more of this character, please.
I would love to see Claud fight, but first you need to be fully prepared to present him in front of other writers.
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Apr 15, 2013 2:03 PM #946933
It's okay to be mean if you help people get better Pluto, haha.
Anyway, basically what Pluto said. You also need to a personality and appearance section before Luzo sees >_> HURRY MAN HURRY!
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Apr 15, 2013 2:33 PM #946947
Quote from pluto_kun
This character reminds me of Crocodile (apparently watched too much anime)
An interesting gladiator... but you'll need to spice things up;
First, describe your character more - right now, all I can see is that Claud is an orphaned teenage boy with sand abilities, but that is it.
It feels like you just copy&pasted the format and put minimum effort in your character - no offense; this is why I avoid CnC-ing. I get mean.

How did he get his abilities? What is his personality? What does he really look like?

It is good to see that you have a profile picture up there, but what I'd like to see is some words.
As for the story, be more creative. Add more things to it. Have fun tweaking with details.
Finally, the demo - it is 156 words. wRHG demo minimum is 300 words :3
Anything else about his ability that you want to show us?

Show me more of this character, please.
I would love to see Claud fight, but first you need to be fully prepared to present him in front of other writers.


What he/she said^
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Apr 15, 2013 7:04 PM #947111
wRHG unlocked

Have fun sanding people to death :3
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Apr 17, 2013 5:27 PM #948887
Quote from Luzoto
wRHG unlocked

Have fun sanding people to death :3


Does the "wRHG unlocked" mean anything? Like if you don't post that in my thread then I'm not allowed to battle someone?
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Apr 17, 2013 5:42 PM #948897
It means that he locked it before for some reason, which I believe was in part about the demo.

Upon the correction for the profile, instead of posting again, he simply edited his post. It would be odd if it still said "wRHG locked" when it wasn't. Not to mention be a little confusing.

If you see a wRHG thread that doesn't say 'wRHG unlocked' it doesn't mean it can't be used, it just means it never had that problem.
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Apr 17, 2013 6:56 PM #948941
Quote from Crankuba
It means that he locked it before for some reason, which I believe was in part about the demo.

Upon the correction for the profile, instead of posting again, he simply edited his post. It would be odd if it still said "wRHG locked" when it wasn't. Not to mention be a little confusing.

If you see a wRHG thread that doesn't say 'wRHG unlocked' it doesn't mean it can't be used, it just means it never had that problem.


OK. Thanks! :D
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Apr 19, 2013 3:19 AM #950000
did a mod change the name of this thread? I don't remember adding "The Robot" to the name
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Apr 26, 2013 1:04 AM #955913
Hewitt nicknamed almost every active characters... in your case, it became "The Robot".
I guess you can feel free to change the title if you wish.
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Apr 26, 2013 5:20 AM #956101
No actually Hewitt made it so we can't change the title or delete the pages, either that or he is currently punishing me for no reason which I find rather despicable since I have a couple pages I need to delete and fix.
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Apr 26, 2013 7:59 AM #956169
Yes you can. I also changed it.
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Jul 16, 2013 5:57 PM #1037233
Would anyone like to battle? I would be pleased to battle since it is summertime, pls pm me for a wRHG battle it would be nice to battle someone.
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