Just a poem I'd made a couple of days back. Tell me how it is. :)
I'm not really much of a poem writer so any comments so I can get better is very much appreciated.

WRISTWATCH

Klink-klang-klink-klang
Went the sound of the loose gears moving
Tick-tock-tick-tock
Went the sound of his time gone passing

One-two-three-four
Steps that it took before he got slashing
Tick-tock-tick-tock
Was the sound before his victim went crashing

Hack-slash-hack-slash
Was the action he kept doing
Tick-tock-tick-tock
Plunging his knife deeper, smiling

Tit-tat-tit-tat
Went the blood as it fell on, dropping
Tick-tock-tick-tock
Went the broken wrist watch, counting

Klink-klang-klink-klang
Went the sound of the loose gears, moving
Tick-tock-tick-tock
Was the last sound the victim heard, dying.