It's been a while~

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Railisk

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Jun 8, 2008 2:47 AM #151257

Hey all, i don't log on very often but i animate every once in a while, so here's my latest work, its just a short loop, nothing fancy. I'd say MedBiginner, maybe high if i were lucky. Rate and constructively criticize please.

!~I'll be back in a while to check up on comments and maybe bump, thanks.

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Jun 8, 2008 3:03 AM #151272

medium beginner, beginners thread.

bye bye.

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Jun 8, 2008 3:11 AM #151278

Mmk, any pointers?

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Jun 8, 2008 3:28 AM #151297

easing and getting rid of choppyness would be a start

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Jun 8, 2008 4:24 AM #151339

Quote from Drag V.5 BETA
medium beginner, beginners thread.

bye bye.

Ouch, thats a put down >.>

Anyway , it was alright , you need to work on easing it , it went rather quick to , also it was new to me and i enjoyed it.

Just work on easing it , and it was alittle choppy , most of it was alright except for the part when he trips, and the swinging of his arms are uneased.

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Jun 8, 2008 4:47 AM #151351

All right, thanks, ill work on that guys.

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Jun 8, 2008 5:40 AM #151368

The running looks good, and the fall is smooth. But the flip after the fall is choppy and the rest after that doesn't look good.

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Jun 8, 2008 8:41 PM #151802

what you need to work on when he tripped it froze for a second then he fell