Fullbody on paper

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May 10, 2013 3:26 PM #970220
Made this a few days ago.
Thought it looked awesome so I posted it.
Cnc please.
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May 10, 2013 3:56 PM #970234
Looks great!
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May 10, 2013 6:36 PM #970337
Wow Ahdo!! You're getting really Good! Only thing that stands out is the head, it either seems too small, or the neck is to thick.
It still looks awesome bro :P
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May 11, 2013 12:11 AM #970604
Why do you specifically state that the drawing is fullbody?
Should we be expecting stickfigures from artists?

I want to start of by noting that the drawing is very simple and lacks some key components that would normally be part of a good drawing, such as shading or any sense of a light source for example. This isn't something that I can really talk about in any more detail since, well, there is no shading or highlighting.
Next I want to focus on anatomy. While the proportions of the character itself are not terrible, apart from the rather long legs and apparent lack of genitalia, its body seems unnaturally stiff. I also noticed that the orientation of his body does not match the orientation of his legs, looking at the body you feel like you are looking straight at him, but he seems to be facing a little more to the left if you look at his legs, crouch and face. Overall the drawing is lacking in nearly every field, it does not contain much detail, doesn't have any form of shading, and is simply very bland to look at. My first recommendation is to spend more time on your drawings. This doesn't look like you devoted much time or effort to make. My second advice is to make rough sketches. These are very important on the stage where you are figuring out what you are going to draw, and how you want it to look. For example, sketching out a simple skeleton could have lead you to a final result that didn't look so damn stiff. Thirdly, this is more of a demand then advice, add shading. Without shading the viewer gets very little sense of depth looking at your drawing, do it however you like, cell shade, do something hyper realistic, whatever, just do something. You would not believe how much of a difference just a little gray can do to your drawings.
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May 16, 2013 10:54 AM #975344
Quote from Chamel
Wow Ahdo!! You're getting really Good!


@ Chamel - dont hate or get me wrong friend, but why did you said this was really good? I'm not being harsh or anything but from what i witnessed here, it just doesn't seem like
its "really good", because honestly, this is just a very simple drawing rather than "good", or should i said "amateur"?

@ Ahdomatic - my recommendation is, you should really practice first before
posting it, i mean please guys, dont just post something you like or want to show, post something that is "WORTHY" of showing, something that you actually worked hard on
and is descent enough to show. I know its good to share and keep the community motivating but this just doesn't seem right because when you said something "simple" like this
good, or not being honest to the artists, they tend to get carried away and often come back with more trashes for the community to clean up, i'm not saying you guys should
stop drawing entirely because you're not good to a level that is worth of sharing or anything farther than that, basically what i'm saying just that, at least you guys spend more
time on it and make it WORTH showing a little bit more, perhaps, a whole lot more...
sorry if that sounds harsh, but truth is truth and you just gotta accept it, i meant no harm to anyone, i just want to spit out the truth so that
perhaps, one can adapt and become better :)
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May 16, 2013 1:28 PM #975501
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@ Chamel - dont hate or get me wrong friend, but why did you said this was really good? I'm not being harsh or anything but from what i witnessed here, it just doesn't seem like
its "really good", because honestly, this is just a very simple drawing rather than "good", or should i said "amateur"?

@ Ahdomatic - my recommendation is, you should really practice first before
posting it, i mean please guys, dont just post something you like or want to show, post something that is "WORTHY" of showing, something that you actually worked hard on
and is descent enough to show. I know its good to share and keep the community motivating but this just doesn't seem right because when you said something "simple" like this
good, or not being honest to the artists, they tend to get carried away and often come back with more trashes for the community to clean up, i'm not saying you guys should
stop drawing entirely because you're not good to a level that is worth of sharing or anything farther than that, basically what i'm saying just that, at least you guys spend more
time on it and make it WORTH showing a little bit more, perhaps, a whole lot more...
sorry if that sounds harsh, but truth is truth and you just gotta accept it, i meant no harm to anyone, i just want to spit out the truth so that
perhaps, one can adapt and become better :)


pretty good Cnc. espescially from somebody i've never seen here before