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My first atempt at EasyToon

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May 14, 2013 11:24 PM #974145
Just did this in a few seconds,tell me what you think.

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May 15, 2013 5:06 PM #974736
Well you just told us it only took you a few seconds and it's only a few frames, so i don't really feel like it's worth critiquing.

You're using just a small fraction of the canvas. Looks like the particle effects are decent, but the gunshot lasts way too long. It takes much less than one frame for a bullet to leave a handgun and disappear from view at the distance we can see here.

Put more time and frames into something and then ask us what we think.
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