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House/Dubstep Test #1(Added #2)

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May 17, 2013 9:26 PM #976537
https://soundcloud.com/failedclone/house-dubstep-test-1

Edit: https://soundcloud.com/failedclone/house-dubstep-test-2

Title says it all.
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May 18, 2013 11:47 AM #977067
It sounds pretty good! I'd just like to point out some things that you could've improved to make the song better, though.

I love the use of the snaps, sleigh bells, and claps by the way. They give the song more of an atmospheric feel. The problem I had was the fact that the song sounds a bit bare, there being only one bassline. Try to add some more instruments/vst's to the mix to give that song a little more feel.

Also, I couldn't tell when the drop was coming unless I looked at the audio spectrum on SoundCloud. Try to give more of a clear sign when the drop appears, as like making one of those industrial-like sounds that slides its pitch higher and higher during the buildup and stops at the drop.

The samples were also placed pretty abruptly, as all of the sound cut off as they played. You can fix this by having some of the beats or vst's play over the drop so it can fill in the spaces of the drop that have no sound whatsoever.

The wobbles were a bit off-beat, so I suggest you try to fix that to make that part of the song sound a bit nicer.

Overall, I thought the song sounded pretty good all in itself. Love the choice of instruments used to signify the drum pattern as well. Keep it up!
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May 18, 2013 12:22 PM #977132
That's actually pretty good. What program do you use?
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May 19, 2013 12:52 AM #977741
@Tsang
I'm currently searching for VSTs, thanks for the amazing CnC btw. :D

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