Second animation

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May 24, 2013 5:57 AM #983004
http://puu.sh/2ZZmV.swf
Doing some combos trying to get better at this.
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May 24, 2013 7:21 AM #983025
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http://puu.sh/2ZZmV.swf
Doing some combos trying to get better at this.
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looking good for 2nd anim time for critiques
You can add trails to improve the impact of the first punch atleast the delay of the punch was solid also at the spining attack you can just put his arm down and do the kick to prevent confusing,he just kicking right? anyways the last kick should have an delay like the first punch :(.
Tip:Prevent resizing,try to add guidelines.

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Not bad for 2nd animation :3
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May 24, 2013 7:45 AM #983036
Not bad like what J.Christian said, I noticed some few resizing of the stick but it's okay for a 2nd time animator. You can download V-cam for better animation and to include punch impacts (shaking the camera). I like it, good job Gears! Hope you improve! c:
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May 24, 2013 3:52 PM #983324
Thanks guys for the feedback.I'm so use to sprites, we resize a lot so yeah. xD
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May 24, 2013 10:58 PM #983560
Your guy seems a bit stiff. Try not to make him move too fast or it'll look like he drank too much coffee or something lol.
But overall, it looks pretty good.
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May 25, 2013 2:08 AM #983671
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Thanks guys for the feedback.I'm so use to sprites, we resize a lot so yeah. xD


ah now i know :3 so it is your second stick animation?
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May 25, 2013 6:51 AM #983844
Yes! =D When it comes to stick, very familiar to flash. ^-^