http://www.filz.us/F5L

looking for comments and critique! :D good to be back on stickpage <3

Very smooth, but you should make it longer.

Nice men but i can't critiqued that :(

The anticipation for the jump isn't exaggerated enough.
An animation is always more interesting when exaggerated.

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The anticipation for the jump isn't exaggerated enough.
An animation is always more interesting when exaggerated.

I'll definitely think about that man thanks

Looks good so far, but I don't really have anything to criticize. Try adding on some more animation to this, and I'll give you my input on it.
I see potential though, so go at it!