http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/gjxu/Dream-Machine

This song literally turned out perfect for me. I did things with this song I've never done before, using synths I've never even considered using, and put it together with a structure I've never tried, and it all turned out amazing.

Let me know what you think, I've never worked harder on anything before, and I've never been happier with my music before this.

I like it, came out great.

Actually, its amazing. Good job.

It would be a great backing track to say a Techno song, I liked it, keep up the good work.

Holy shit dude, this is great. Very nice work.

Thanks guys

Last time I'm bumping this

In a few days I'll have been making music for 9 months, so I thought I'd show you guys my first full song, to show my improvement.

http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/omjy/Backwards-Logic

It's morning here, and I somewhat felt asleep by that.
Just because its very soft, but the effects are nice.
Maybe add a very soft wind blowing loop at the background/.

Wind might work during the quieter guitar parts, or a sweeping synth. I don't think keeping it in the background the whole time would be necessary, though, given that I have a very airy pad going through most of the song.

Thanks for the suggestion though, I don't hear many of those anymore.