Dream Machine

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Jun 12, 2008 4:23 AM #154604
http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/gjxu/Dream-Machine

This song literally turned out perfect for me. I did things with this song I've never done before, using synths I've never even considered using, and put it together with a structure I've never tried, and it all turned out amazing.

Let me know what you think, I've never worked harder on anything before, and I've never been happier with my music before this.
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Jun 12, 2008 5:06 AM #154622
I like it, came out great.

Actually, its amazing. Good job.
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Jun 12, 2008 6:45 AM #154667
It would be a great backing track to say a Techno song, I liked it, keep up the good work.
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Jun 12, 2008 7:45 AM #154699
Holy shit dude, this is great. Very nice work.
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Jun 12, 2008 9:40 PM #155064
Thanks guys
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Jun 15, 2008 1:07 AM #156797
Last time I'm bumping this

In a few days I'll have been making music for 9 months, so I thought I'd show you guys my first full song, to show my improvement.

http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/omjy/Backwards-Logic
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Jun 15, 2008 8:56 AM #157137
It's morning here, and I somewhat felt asleep by that.
Just because its very soft, but the effects are nice.
Maybe add a very soft wind blowing loop at the background/.
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Jun 15, 2008 6:19 PM #157382
Wind might work during the quieter guitar parts, or a sweeping synth. I don't think keeping it in the background the whole time would be necessary, though, given that I have a very airy pad going through most of the song.

Thanks for the suggestion though, I don't hear many of those anymore.