Voltaire



Weapon:


http://www.filz.us/view/98c4f13b-fb7/
Do not use it if you did not battle me !

Abilities:
►He can punch very strong
►He can move very fast
►He can Act like Death,Pretend that he got hurt, and Etc...

Weakness:
►He fail acting that he got hurt

About:
Voltaire since birth he have a power and his parents know that since her mother is pregnant.And his named in her power a thunder.
Voltaire expirience a bullying in his school.And Voltaire did not know that he have a power.So one day Voltaire bullying again in there room he is so very angry he punch his classmate and his classmate Dead.Voltaire in that time he voltaire know that have a super strenght.
THE END

Demo:
http://www.filz.us/view/18494317-fea/

Battles:
None

Score:
0/0

Win/Lose

Such a nice demo, and your character.
But I cannot surely understand your character's ability, and your weakness.
Maybe you can try to fix it, or make a new epic one! :)

Ok dude sorry im bad in Grammar

Maby you should put a example?

This RHG is not actually that well thought of, or rushed, is it?
It's super strength and speed, like any other super-powered RHG, one weakness is that he fails to pretend he doesn't get hurt?
If that's what you mean
No offense, but it's not kinda well-thought of to me
"Voltaire since birth he have a power and his parents know that since her mother is pregnant.And his named in her power a thunder."
You could make that super strength thing, the power of thunder punches (Again, I did not understand that with the grammar) =w=
But if you insist then ok..
Btw, to fix your grammar:
1.His punches are super strong
2.His speed is very fast/lightning fast
3.He pretends to not get hurt/act like he can't get hurt.
Weakness:
1.Fails to pretend he didn't get hurt
Just saying my opinions

no he means at third he can pretend death or play dead at dogs XD
also i saw some Kidlat(Tagalog word) reference there,specially the name.

So an acter rhg ? that's no abillity i guess ! for weakness if he sucks at acting how that should help someone that he wants to fight with you to find your weakspot ?

just as Mirandez said.. maybe he rushed it.. anyways, gl i guess..

I made a redesign, hope you don't mind :D
[swf=http://www.filz.us/files/7c6e353c/df6/Voltaire_Sword.swf] width=700 height=200 [/swf]

Quote from Findood

Maby you should put a example?

a possum, when it is a danger, it pretends that it is dead, or that it is badly injured, get it :/


nice rhg btw

Only one weakness xD - strong character :O
But demo is GOOD! Flow and smooth!
keep it up! ;)

Quote from Mark XD

a possum, when it is a danger, it pretends that it is dead, or that it is badly injured, get it :/

For example

Nice RHG~
Wanna Battle?