A nameless mind
Started by: Automaton | Replies: 2 | Views: 1,084
Jun 1, 2013 10:22 PM #992710
Well, I saw a girl today at an art gallery. She was sat there drawing, and I couldn't take my eyes off her. I decided to write a poem about it when I got home. It's a rhyming pattern that I've never seen before, and don't really like (ABCDD), but the way I write poems is I just let it all flow, and don't change it much afterwards. Here it is:
Jun 1, 2013 10:43 PM #992721
This is... I don't know... I mean that in a good way.
It's passioante, it's full of understanding. It's emotional and full of life.
it doesn't rhyme like a traditional or childish poem. It flows nicely. I really do like this. I really do.
It's passioante, it's full of understanding. It's emotional and full of life.
it doesn't rhyme like a traditional or childish poem. It flows nicely. I really do like this. I really do.
Jun 10, 2013 11:50 PM #1003557
Thanks man :)