Drake

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Jun 2, 2013 6:58 AM #993167
Drake
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Note: A picture is more than 1000 words. This is the Appearance.
Appearance (Click to Show)

The Story (Click to Show)

Abilities (Click to Show)


Personality of Drake (Click to Show)


Weaknesses (Click to Show)

Demo (Click to Show)

Wins/Losses 0/0
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Jun 2, 2013 9:55 AM #993273
Seriously, did I just start the Dragon's trend for wRHG?
First my character is able to merge with dragons souls.
Then Pluto is able to merge even partially.
Now this wRHG comes up.

Someone must stop this trend.
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Jun 2, 2013 10:00 AM #993278
Quote from Triss
Seriously, did I just start the Dragon's trend for wRHG?
First my character is able to merge with dragons souls.
Then Pluto is able to merge even partially.
Now this wRHG comes up.

Someone must stop this trend.


You credit yourself too much. Stop doing it, its embarrasing to see.
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Jun 2, 2013 10:04 AM #993281
Quote from _Ai_
You credit yourself too much. Stop doing it, its embarrasing to see.

You know I was joking right?
My character has different elements just like you.
There is always someone who takes partial ideas (like me).
I just saying this because I wanted an exciting wRHG, an unique one.

And this wRHG is rather too simple.

EDIT: On second thought, a humanoid dragon seemed to be interesting enough to watch. Yet your page are lacking "tidiness". Please edit it.
And since he's a dragon, he must have an unique ability than a normal human. You should find that "unique" ability.
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Jun 2, 2013 10:32 AM #993306
Sorry but i made this as a normal RHG before you were even on stickpage ;D
I changed RHG but now placed this up as a wRHG

EDIT: Ill tidy it then i guess. And if you read the abilities section you'll realise he wields air and not fire. I had a 3 page essay last time about this when Drake was an RHG. I DONT want a 5 page book on it here on wRHG Lol

EDIT 2: and my join date is not exactly when i started RHG. okay
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Jun 2, 2013 10:33 AM #993308
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Sorry but i made this as a normal RHG before you were even on stickpage ;D
I changed RHG but now placed this up as a wRHG

No wonder. Well, have fun battling the wRHG section. As a fellow writer I welcome thee.
But seriously, edit your page. It's really untidy, and the demo is too short, actually feels to lack luster.
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Jun 2, 2013 10:42 AM #993321
My story is much better than my demo to be honest. Read the story pweaze ;D
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Jun 2, 2013 11:28 AM #993369
Quote from DrakeTheDragon

Note: A picture is more than 1000 words. This is the Appearance.

Juss sayin' :I

Looks pretty cool. Good luck!
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Jun 2, 2013 1:25 PM #993499
Woops. Thank you Sharp. :p I know how much you liked drake ha ha. Did you read the story?
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Jun 2, 2013 1:49 PM #993521
You know when I came here and I saw that picture I WAS LIKE "AWW WTF WHY WOULD HE DO THAT!" Then I quickly realized its just a tail.

Good luck in future battles.
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Jun 2, 2013 5:29 PM #993832
Put a counter for the number of wins/losses you have, as well as battles. Won't lock it over that since it's a small addition, but do add it soon.
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Jun 4, 2013 5:38 AM #995656
Oh okay. Thank you for the heads up