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Practice makes perfect.

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Hairysun

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Jun 5, 2013 1:11 PM #997160
Here are some shitty tests:
http://filz.us/Gyj

Here is a somewhat successful test:
http://filz.us/Gyn

Update!: http://filz.us/Gz2

C&C is always welcome and appreciated!
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Jun 5, 2013 1:14 PM #997161
So viewtifoul ;_;
Amazing FB... Need dem tablets nao
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Jun 5, 2013 3:05 PM #997270
Both of them are really good. I'd just like to note something I found in the second animation, however.

The giant seems to take the shape of a large, masculine fellow, so I doubt it'd be able to swing its axe that fast, as it looks unnatural. I'd prefer to add more frames during the swings of the giant's axe to give more force.

Keep at it, Flux! These look great! :D
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Jun 5, 2013 3:16 PM #997281
Quote from Tsang
Both of them are really good. I'd just like to note something I found in the second animation, however.

The giant seems to take the shape of a large, masculine fellow, so I doubt it'd be able to swing its axe that fast, as it looks unnatural. I'd prefer to add more frames during the swings of the giant's axe to give more force.

Keep at it, Flux! These look great! :D


I think I get what you're saying but I disagree. The swing is perfect it's just the preparation for the swing that should take longer/be more pronounced, as in he should put the axe back further and make the burly bloke's back/shoulder arch. Also Flux perhaps he could grip the Axe with two hands to make the movement more powerful during the last swing as it does look a little unrealistic.
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Jun 5, 2013 3:37 PM #997292
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I think I get what you're saying but I disagree. The swing is perfect it's just the preparation for the swing that should take longer/be more pronounced, as in he should put the axe back further and make the burly bloke's back/shoulder arch. Also Flux perhaps he could grip the Axe with two hands to make the movement more powerful during the last swing as it does look a little unrealistic.

He throws a punch, he doesn't swing the axe a second time.

UPDATE:
http://filz.us/Gz2
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Jun 5, 2013 4:22 PM #997341
you seem kinda rusty Flux, these arn't as good as your usual ones! They're both good though, The part where he back flips over the big guy looks off since there wasn't a whole lot of anticipation for it though.
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Jun 5, 2013 4:51 PM #997369
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He throws a punch, he doesn't swing the axe a second time.

UPDATE:
http://filz.us/Gz2


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I see, he's punching with the axe in hand, perhaps make it a bit more clear by making him swap the axe with his right hand.

The added stuff looks nice, you can see the skinnier guy is getting cocky.
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Jun 5, 2013 6:57 PM #997505
Quote from Lolzafish
I think I get what you're saying but I disagree. The swing is perfect it's just the preparation for the swing that should take longer/be more pronounced, as in he should put the axe back further and make the burly bloke's back/shoulder arch. Also Flux perhaps he could grip the Axe with two hands to make the movement more powerful during the last swing as it does look a little unrealistic.

Yeah you're right, I meant to say anticipation, not force. Thanks for clearing that up.

Also, I like how the update is looking so far, Flux.
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