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Hi Tatel,

So. I am just telling you what I see. Take this as criticism and build on it. lets go!
I just want to tell you what happens in my eyes as the viewer. We build on that forward. So. I dont think for first looks that the animation is appealing. Its a white stage with some bodyshaped figures on it. Its starts with A man going forward to his target. He jumps. But I think it would be better to see him run away out of the stage. Then there comes a other scene. Im assuming that that is the enemy. He turns around. its quite logical. I like it. then there comes the 3Dish angle that the killer is heading for the target. Here he runs so I guess that makes up for the first scene. (I see your doubleframing you bastard!) then comes the slomo. Its good It fits. I dont see any problems. after that there comes the head cutoff. the head just dissapears in middair? Its quite weird. I am assuming that its just falling to the gound. but it does not look like it :/ And then the end. where it just loops and do the same. Pretty cool that it loops tough!

Good luck, I hope it helps your view on animation more! Peace.

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Woah :O tatelpriwkz! you still have yout talent
you may don't know me, but you maybe still remember LOLingboy, don't you?

haha.. welcome back to SP :>

shit your LoLingboy?shit daaaaaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum.

TATEL, U POSTED ON STICKPAGE.
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I love it!but I think you should remove the spaces from scene to scene.thats all.

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