I have the intro as a MC because I didnt want the whole intro to play when I tested the movie. It's an upcoming anim that's hopefully going to turn out well. I need to add another Black Stick, and I'll doo that now. I'll keep you guys updated on this.
http://www.antiup.net/view/5346/
UPDAEEEETS: http://www.antiup.net/view/5364/
C&C pl0x
Intruder PREVIEW
Started by: Checkers | Replies: 23 | Views: 893
Jun 24, 2008 9:04 PM #166113
Jun 24, 2008 9:08 PM #166116
The stick is drawn weird and I did not like that flip at the end.
Also the teleport was lame.
Also the teleport was lame.
Jun 24, 2008 9:11 PM #166119
What could I improve on the teleport and the flip? Also, Your usertitle is not true.
Jun 24, 2008 9:15 PM #166124
Quote from CheckersWhat could I improve on the teleport and the flip? Also, Your usertitle is not true.
If you combine the past present and future than it is.
The flip looked weird, it just doesn't look good, probably because his legs are bent so much and he stayed at the peak too long. The sticks look weird, they are be needing the feet.
The teleport just looks lame. It's like a time saving device. Since you obviously don't feel like animating particles for the teleport how about you remove the blur and then see what it looks like?
Also like make it either shrink or expand really fast.
Jun 24, 2008 9:19 PM #166128
Quite funny,lol. When he hits the wall. Is he blind? Apparently he looks blind.
Anyways nice smooth movements. The easing was not badly done and the special effects were simple but atleast not filter whore alert" ones.
For the intro it's coming along nicely. Thought make it more interesting. Put some more funny scenes in there and different type of a fight. Not just the same one guy vs 100 other guys in a massacre. Something new, original!
Your blood thought should stay in the air for a longer period so it will be more noticeable. Also add more particles. Some of the movements are a bit wobbly.
Good luck.
Anyways nice smooth movements. The easing was not badly done and the special effects were simple but atleast not filter whore alert" ones.
For the intro it's coming along nicely. Thought make it more interesting. Put some more funny scenes in there and different type of a fight. Not just the same one guy vs 100 other guys in a massacre. Something new, original!
Your blood thought should stay in the air for a longer period so it will be more noticeable. Also add more particles. Some of the movements are a bit wobbly.
Good luck.
Jun 24, 2008 9:20 PM #166132
Quote from SchwaIf you combine the past present and future than it is.
That makes me think to loud then I get a headache. ILL USE LOJIX FOR DIS WUN. I'm her brother, and I see her leik, evury dai. So I know the people she sees. OLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOL But there is one SPP member we did see IRL. And it was Spitz.
@James I'm getting some other people from SPP to be some of the bosses in thin animation, so it will have a little flavour to it. (When it's done)
Jun 24, 2008 9:22 PM #166133
Quote from CheckersThat makes me think to loud then I get a headache. ILL USE LOJIX FOR DIS WUN. I'm her brother, and I see her leik, evury dai. So I know the people she sees. OLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOL But there is one SPP member we did see IRL. And it was Spitz.
Stop thinking, you'll just hurt yourself.
Jun 24, 2008 9:35 PM #166155
I allready have dude, I allready have.
Jun 24, 2008 9:39 PM #166158
Quote from CheckersI allready have dude, I allready have.
Ghey, but seriously try what I said about the teleport
Jun 24, 2008 9:41 PM #166160
Ok. It's funny because its the first time i've been called ghey. I'm suprised I havn't been.
@James He didnt walk into the wall, and he's not blind. That's his reaction to a (soon to be) stick.
@James He didnt walk into the wall, and he's not blind. That's his reaction to a (soon to be) stick.
Jun 24, 2008 10:30 PM #166232
BUMP, and an update. http://www.antiup.net/view/5364/
Fixed teleports, added bloods, a new guy, some fixed v-cam, and bodies.
Fixed teleports, added bloods, a new guy, some fixed v-cam, and bodies.
Jun 24, 2008 10:31 PM #166234
No blur on teleports.
Go to my tread.
Flip still looks weird.
Go to my tread.
Flip still looks weird.
Jun 24, 2008 10:33 PM #166237
ok. I'll go to your tread.
Jun 25, 2008 1:14 PM #166785
YOU GOTTA HUMP DE BUMP, YOU GOTTA BUMP DE HUMP. Srs, I needeth comments for this. And awsome updates, I added the intro with a skip button. (I'm a fucking genius)
http://www.antiup.net/view/5442/
http://www.antiup.net/view/5442/
Jun 25, 2008 2:50 PM #166818
Teleport: Make it mc, then blur y 10, high q. Next frame gone. Next frame same mc back, next frame stick