well here it goes : http://www.antiup.net/view/5807/
tell me what you guys think.. i want some feedback ,, not only : IT SUCKS or ITS AWESOME.. explain why,, and help me get better k?
first try at line-style
Started by: kayzer | Replies: 6 | Views: 463
Jun 27, 2008 6:02 PM #169646
Jun 27, 2008 7:49 PM #169761
Jun 27, 2008 7:57 PM #169767
His leg re-sizes a lot, I don't know if you mean that to happen or not, though.
The punch needs more force and anticipation. Good work though, it's smooth and I see that you eased it. (the easing isn't perfect though) =]
The punch needs more force and anticipation. Good work though, it's smooth and I see that you eased it. (the easing isn't perfect though) =]
Jun 27, 2008 8:01 PM #169770
thx, ill work on the punch and learn more about easing,, but i don't think ill continue the line-style dX,, brush is more me
Jun 28, 2008 7:53 AM #170470
bump, more comments plz :)
Jun 28, 2008 8:39 AM #170500
yay another line animator... ^^
well the animation was kinda choppy dude.. using line is really simple, the leg resized because probably you rushed this, good line animations take perseverance(well.. all great animations do), and try zooming closer to the stick figure to animate more accurately.
well the animation was kinda choppy dude.. using line is really simple, the leg resized because probably you rushed this, good line animations take perseverance(well.. all great animations do), and try zooming closer to the stick figure to animate more accurately.
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Jun 28, 2008 12:13 PM #170612
yeah leg resizing is a problem of mine too.