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Rev's Thread [Interz attempt on DD]

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Jun 25, 2013 11:28 AM #1019128
Hai! Welcome to my thread. Here you will find all of my animations ever since I came back from my break off animating. Old animations are gone, so don't ask for them. If you want any .pivs, just PM me.

*Thread order: Lastest animation last


Guy coming out of stomach thing.

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I kinda fucked this one up with the ground placement for the loop, you can see the mistake near the end. Also the arms were a bit shaky when his stomach opened.

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Hardcore Parkour
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I actually am pretty proud of this one. It's pretty smooth if I say so myself, little to no shakiness, annd I liked how the flip didn't look awkward. But yeah, let me know YOUR feedback on it.

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High-beg Attempt o.o
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It is what it is, I'm trying to refine my skills.

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Blood Test
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Just doing a few tests before going into a big animation.

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Spin-kick Test
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Just doing a few tests before going into a big animation.

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YUSS. Looks like Rev's effects skillz are back :D
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Title says all, I've been doing a few effects tests lately, looks like they paid off :D

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Interz attempt on DD
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I've yet to wait for feedback on whether I actually made it.

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Jun 25, 2013 7:29 PM #1019530
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Hardcore Parkour
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I actually am pretty proud of this one. It's pretty smooth if I say so myself, little to no shakiness, annd I liked how the flip didn't look awkward. But yeah, let me know YOUR feedback on it.

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I like the jump, but I think you could make the landing a bit smoother. When he lands he goes straight down and then goes back when he stands up. If you're careful with the knees and back you could keep his head moving backwards constantly. It's kind of hard to explain. If I whore out this tutorial it might help.
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Jun 26, 2013 12:27 AM #1019720
Thanks for the reply and posting the tut, I'll check it out. I really appreciate it.
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Jun 26, 2013 1:28 AM #1019778
I like the angle for the high beg attempt but their wasn't much movement in it. Judging by your other animation you just need to fix your flow but you're good in easing and foot placement.
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Jun 26, 2013 7:34 PM #1020424
Yeah, I've been struggling with flow recently.. But I read Zed's tut :D should be better now. Working on a new anim atm.
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Jun 26, 2013 10:39 PM #1020493
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