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Average Reds vs Super Blues

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Blot

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Jun 29, 2008 3:34 PM #171480
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just started it tonight got up to 372 frames and thort i would ask u peeps if i should continue it....i think it is my best animation..... and i could make this into a series depending on what u say, so good constructive criticism
oh yah....
credz to:
Blacky for the two blue guys
Engravedx for the tall red guy in the middle
Pf0 for the small armed red guy at the back
Naglfar for the pinkish guy at the front
droidz for the drop, the flying water, the letters
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Jun 29, 2008 3:37 PM #171482
I think you need more of a storyline to develop it into a long anim, the movements are a big jerky, but by all means-AHHH! oh, only a peice of paper.

As i was saying by all means continue.
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Jun 29, 2008 3:41 PM #171486
its kewl i like the mini fight with the blue and red, nice puches
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Jun 29, 2008 10:00 PM #171777
yo ed, i see that youre getting slightly beta. good fight man. overall good anime.
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Jun 29, 2008 10:03 PM #171780
Movements were mostly stiff and uneased, and the reacitons could use a lot more work. Don't like the text either.
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Jun 29, 2008 10:11 PM #171790
hahah well i guess nothing can be completely perfect, keep trying youll getit
am i right?
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Jun 30, 2008 12:42 AM #171905
It's very stiff and the animation needs more easing. But I say continue it, would like to see this finished ;)
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Jun 30, 2008 12:43 AM #171908
Nice Animation. Just alittle stiff. Continue it, I wanna see what happens too.
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Jun 30, 2008 1:03 AM #171927
thanks all lfor the comments moar?
and i added the creditz
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Jul 20, 2008 4:07 AM #193154
i'd say it was good, if only you would of made atleast one of the stks
since EVERY stk was borrowed, i'd say its okay
(( by the way, sorry for bumping an old thread >.> cuz i just realized this was from last month ))
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Jul 20, 2008 4:08 AM #193155
I don't like it too much.

Just work on your basics.

It lacks a lot of easing.
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