This is my first fullbody picture in a long time. She started out as a practice image, just getting use to the anatomy, and I'd got carried away with the details and stuff. Even though I'm giving her away, she 's a pretty good practice. If you want her, just comment the best name for her, and she's yours. Not on here, on the DA link.

http://seen246.deviantart.com/art/Nameless-Woman-FIRST-OC-GIVEAWAY-384538164?q=gallery%3Aseen246&qo=0



CnC is optional, just don't go balistic on it like a mindless maniac.

It's very good, the hair doesn't fit the rest of the character, though. It's not that it isn't good, it's that it's too good for the rest of the body, the hair should go on something like a lol skin, where the hair is phenomenally detailed



The waist seems a little big for the rest of the body, but then again, i'm so used to drawing guys that i'm not to good with female anatomy.

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It's very good, the hair doesn't fit the rest of the character, though. It's not that it isn't good, it's that it's too good for the rest of the body, the hair should go on something like a lol skin, where the hair is phenomenally detailed

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The waist seems a little big for the rest of the body, but then again, i'm so used to drawing guys that i'm not to good with female anatomy.

I was pondering about the hair color for her, and from my personal opinion, I thought it suits her better. The hair style, however, I'm not much of a hair stylist, so I just thought up what was best.

Her waist was necessary for she has that hourglass figure I've been shaping.

Thanks for your criticism.

Her waist is MASSIVE it doesn't even...
thats the only thing i see.

I like what you were going for. I see that you were trying a unique style. But it isn't pleasing to the eye.

The hair doesn't go with the style you were using, it seems messy and lazy. The eye doesn't sit well with me either.

All in all, great work! Very unique

Thanks, and besides, it's one of the few FBs I've done, and I wasn't use to SAI at the moment. I've started to learn the anatomy by all the tutorials I've collected from Tumblr. Great stuff I've gathered.

Don't worry, I'll be improving with each drawing/adoptable!

P.S. I'd love how after I've gave away the adopt to acutelatios, everybody shows up and starts CnCing! Before it was given away, no one gave a flying fish!

@cmkinusn

Might want to spoiler that. I don't know how well nudity is received here.

@Shadowkirby

Other than the obvious pear figure as opposed to hourglass (especially the lack of curvature), it's obvious that you don't really know what you are doing. Clothing is illogical, wrapping over the boobs despite looking particularly loose, hair seems to be lazily brushed out, unaligned facial features, zero space for the crotch...I could continue listing, but since it's apparently your first time doing this, I'll just suggest for you to try and do gesture sketches. Get a website that gives you picture after picture of nude people, and sketch the poses out in two minutes or less to get the feel of the shape of a human body.

Yes. Nude people. No exceptions.

well, i will say that underwear is okay, especially for people like me who have no freetime away from people. I cant exactly sketch nudes with little brothers and sisters around, and I doubt he can either unless he is single and alone, lol. You can find a lot of non-nudes on deviantart, but if you wish you can also find plenty of nudes too, done by people who care about curves and how the pose looks.