good for a first try.But it needs a lot of work.
First u need to improve on easing.Make each movement flow into the other.
While punching someone,the whole body and head has to move and bend down a little.U'rs was stiff.
While jumping the stick has to bend down and then bounce.If he doesn't bend down,it seems like he's flying.
That goes for the same on landing too.U cant just stand as soon as u jump.U have to bend down and then come to the position.
I think the second punch dint touch the other stick.Make it touch and get the exact reaction.The blue one stands stiff even after being hit.Try hitting someone in real life and see the reaction.Apply the same here.
Finally the blue stick was left incomplete.It vanished without even touching the ground.Make him fall down and complete his part.
Keep practicing and u can sure improve.It was really good for a first try.^_^