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BADASS POETRY THREAD: SHOW US YOUR WORD POWER!!!

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Jul 29, 2013 1:09 AM #1050765
Quote from Stricken?
Honestly you all REALLLLY suck at rapping. Honestly.


The first verse to this song is My submission to this stupid thread.
Suck on it.


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Claims everyone else sucks, then posts another persons work instead of his own.
Bitin' motha fucka, before you judge others put yourself out there, otherwise you're just a bitch.

After this rap list your name will be apt "Stricken" Cause you can't hack this lyrical ignition.
People will say "Jutsu" and you'll begin flinchin' like a hopelessly abused spouse who's outta the kitchen.

Cause I'm wishin' that instead of judging others, you'll post some CC for your hiphop head brothers.
If you're bad there's only one way to get better, see, so quit being such a prick mother fucker, geeze.

Also, the track you posted is fucking lame;
More redundant than the question mark in your name.

With similar samey bars spit by every wack emcee;
Slivers of talent run sparse, so it belongs in here, actually.

So please don't act at me, like you're to be a verdict.
I knew that track was wack the second that I heard it.

And the fuck did they do to their voices? I can't hear them clear.
I could get a better tone if I fucked a vocaloid in the rear.

They spit like they've got a title but I couldn't give a fuck.
Like a samurai - I would slice their belly and spill their guts.

You too, Stricken, see, although you seem to sicken me.
Going easy on my victim is my first time rhyme policy.

Everyone gets one and only one;
So shut your fucking face and try to be helpful, son.
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Jul 29, 2013 2:18 AM #1050837
Jutsu... Love me.


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Cc the shit outta me please.
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Jul 29, 2013 11:40 AM #1051251
Ya'll making useless raps
Cobalt what the heck this is a crap
No not really but pentatonix can do shit
This is frickin awesome and you dont get sum tits

LLOOOOOOLLL FUCK YOU PEOPLE WHAT IS THIS
THIS IS MAKING EVERYONE GIVE SO MUCH PISS
THIS RAP MAY KINDA BE RACIST
BUT YALL NIGGAS NOT GOTTA BE RAPIST

BOOOOM FUCK THIS SHIT
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Jul 29, 2013 12:19 PM #1051277
I don't care if you give me shit
All you say is "fuck this shit!"
Yo ain't be better than all of this
Holy shit! Just eat my DICK!

Yo cobalt chick you sound like dick
All your niggas look grandma shit
Post my ass that looks like this
Holy shit! Go deal with it!


(Is this too much? I hope this ain't too aggressive...)
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Jul 29, 2013 1:23 PM #1051354
Quote from Rik120
I don't think its too agressive, but i can tell you that it makes no sense at all XD


Boom rik you just pwned harvie
You have nothing to argue with me
Im just a shitty ass guy
Who doesnt want to go to the store and buy

Meh that was a lie, I keep buying mountains
Mountain dews to be exact, it wouldnt be a pain
This shit makes no sense, so yeah
I make the worst raps ever, worse than Lea

Fuck this shit I seriously will quit this forums for a while. But that doesnt mean I wanna be banned.
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Jul 29, 2013 1:28 PM #1051358
Every time this thread appears, I get the urge to join it... =n= Anyways:

Poetic Justice (Click to Show)
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Jul 29, 2013 1:32 PM #1051360
Quote from Rik120
I don't think its too agressive, but i can tell you that it makes no sense at all XD


Oh my god you don't have brain
I can see yo dick so small as a grain
You don't have a time cuz you suck than mine
Get out of this thread and cuz yo running out of time

Wuuuut!?
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Jul 29, 2013 1:45 PM #1051369
Quote from harvie89
Oh my god you don't have brain
I can see yo dick so small as a grain
You don't have a time cuz you suck than mine
Get out of this thread and cuz yo running out of time

Wuuuut!?


Wow, so much for burns.
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Jul 29, 2013 1:45 PM #1051370
Quote from harvie89
Oh my god you don't have brain
I can see yo dick so small as a grain
You don't have a time cuz you suck than mine
Get out of this thread and cuz yo running out of time

Wuuuut!?


Wow, so much for burns.
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Jul 29, 2013 1:54 PM #1051380
Really quick rhyme (Click to Show)
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Jul 29, 2013 2:14 PM #1051397
Quote from BoomerangReturns
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Another burn here.

Why yall niggas making so much burns
How about dem feels, will you give them a turn?
Somebody saved 20K to help him talk
But gave it away for a boy who cant walk

Not being racist, im running out of ideas lol sorry for those who got affected, but you know what, I am expecting for a black best friend.
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Jul 29, 2013 2:53 PM #1051443
Quote from Rik120
You just a picked a fight with the wrong guy bitch!
Speaking of dicks, i bet you named yours titch.
I was trying to be friendly but thats over now.
so shut the fuck up and go read a dictionary, "pal".
before you come round here grow up abit.
thats what i said to your mother, She thinks im fit.

i alctually don't mind you, im just rapping son.


I know... : )

As the time you see this post right now
Yo face will be like crap right now
If you're pissed right now go ahead get laid
Cuz, Your mom is a freak like circ deso le

Gtg sleep...
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Jul 29, 2013 9:13 PM #1051770
Quote from Jutsu
Claims everyone else sucks, then posts another persons work instead of his own.
Bitin' motha fucka, before you judge others put yourself out there, otherwise you're just a bitch.

After this rap list your name will be apt "Stricken" Cause you can't hack this lyrical ignition.
People will say "Jutsu" and you'll begin flinchin' like a hopelessly abused spouse who's outta the kitchen.

Cause I'm wishin' that instead of judging others, you'll post some CC for your hiphop head brothers.
If you're bad there's only one way to get better, see, so quit being such a prick mother fucker, geeze.

Also, the track you posted is fucking lame;
More redundant than the question mark in your name.

With similar samey bars spit by every wack emcee;
Slivers of talent run sparse, so it belongs in here, actually.

So please don't act at me, like you're to be a verdict.
I knew that track was wack the second that I heard it.

And the fuck did they do to their voices? I can't hear them clear.
I could get a better tone if I fucked a vocaloid in the rear.

They spit like they've got a title but I couldn't give a fuck.
Like a samurai - I would slice their belly and spill their guts.

You too, Stricken, see, although you seem to sicken me.
Going easy on my victim is my first time rhyme policy.

Everyone gets one and only one;
So shut your fucking face and try to be helpful, son.


Hey Jackhole. The song I posted is mine.
-_- You think I don't do stuff outside of this website?
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Jul 29, 2013 9:21 PM #1051777
hipiddy hop (Click to Show)
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Jul 29, 2013 9:25 PM #1051780
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I can't rhyme
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