A rap renegade, you'll rue the day I raised my blade.
Vorpal words eviscerates leaving wack rappers flayed.

Explosive like a hand grenade BLASTING off shrapnel and concussion;
and newbies scatter like frightened soldiers from my percussion.

Yeah, and you're going to get some PTSD, Pretty Thick And Strict Dick.
See, emcees who challenge me need punch cards for their hospital trips.



Hmm here's three bars off the top of my head...
Couldn't think of anywhere to go with it.

Quote from Stricken?

Hey Jackhole. The song I posted is mine.
-_- You think I don't do stuff outside of this website?

Oh do you not like it when people are judgmental shit heads at you?
D'aaw you should reflect on that a little bit.

Though I do doubt you.

Why all the hate in this poetic thread
Because we all know when i start rhyming you're dead
I hear lots of violence, like bullets to the head
how about we spread some love instead

Ha, you must be gay if you thought i was serious
If you think you can win, then you're gettin delirious
Ill shoot you in the leg, bloods leavin a stain
How sadistic i get can be a little insane
You can wonder why im so inhumane
But the only thing you'll find is a whole lota pain

Ill make the blood rain when im through with this rhyme
Because you know that ill win every time
Because every time and again i will win, its a sign
That im the best and you know my kind

Im the kind that will go strait to the top
If i made a cd, itd be sold by the box
Id have millions in pocket and the cash flow wouldnt stop
While my competition is sucking my cock

Why dont I do it? I dont need recognition
I dont need cash to win a competition
Id have more offers for contract sigs, than a petition
Im the most origional around, the first edition.

I can kick yo ass every day, every night.
You ain't got the guts to give me a fight.

I'm the boss.
You're a loss.
And you'll never beat me.
I can make you suck a horse's cock, just wait and see.

All you do all day is be a swag fag, trying too be cool.
But you aren't, you dumbass, you're just a fucking fool.

You can't beat me, so don't even try.
All you gonna do is throw out a bunch of lies.

You're just rappin' because you ain't got no job.
I got 100 bitches, and your only girlfriend is a slob.

Yeah this is my first attempt at rapping. Is it good? :l

Quote from Molgera

I can kick yo ass every day, every night.
You ain't got the guts to give me a fight.

I'm the boss.
You're a loss.
And you'll never beat me.
I can make you suck a horse's cock, just wait and see.

All you do all day is be a swag fag, trying too be cool.
But you aren't, you dumbass, you're just a fucking fool.

You can't beat me, so don't even try.
All you gonna do is throw out a bunch of lies.

You're just rappin' because you ain't got no job.
I got 100 bitches, and your only girlfriend is a slob.

Yeah this is my first attempt at rapping. Is it good? :l

Yep.. Sound great...

I don't care what you speak
Your girlfriend is a freak
I can see all yo shit
As small as yo dick

C'mon man you smell like a piss
From a shitty hobo that gave you a jizz
Yo mothafucking dick you scream girl
I fucked your mom and yo gay assed dad


(too much?)

Quote from Molgera

I can lick yo ass every day, every night.
You ain't got the butts to give me a fight.

I'm the anus
You're a panus
And you'll always stuff me.
I can suck a horse's cock, just wait and see.

All I do all day is be a swag fag, trying too be cool.
But I'm not, I'm just a dumbass, just a fucking fool.

You can beat me, so don't even try.
All I'm gonna do is throw out a bunch of lies.

I'm just rappin' because I ain't got no job.
I got 0 bitches, cause I'm a slob.

Yeah this is my first attempt at sucking. Is it good? :l

Hey bitch I fixed your lyrics for you. I don't need to write something new, to diss you.
Bow down to Cobalt.

Why would you stoop to his level of retardation.

Cobalt...4/10

Quote from Cobalt

Hey bitch I fixed your lyrics for you. I don't need to write something new, to diss you.
Bow down to Cobalt.

Nigga, I got the rhythm and all the cool tricks,
but only trick you can do is suck your mother's tiny dick.

Editing my post? Ha! How fucking pathetic!
I'm a professional badass, its just part of my genetics.

You can't fix my lyrics, they are perfect and clean.
And your lyrics? Fuck that, your shit's way too obscene.

You're a pussy, you're a bitch. Ya know that, right?
Prepare your anus, cause I'm gonna rape your ass tonight.

Quote from Molgera

Nigga, I got the rhythm and all the cool tricks,
but only trick you can do is suck your mother's tiny dick.

Editing my post? Ha! How fucking pathetic!
I'm a professional badass, its just part of my genetics.

You can't fix my lyrics, they are perfect and clean.
And your lyrics? Fuck that, your shit's way too obscene.

You're a pussy, you're a bitch. Ya know that, right?
Prepare your anus, cause I'm gonna rape your ass tonight.

you poor, poor, fool.
you useless, useless, tool!
I shudder to think of what they'e teaching you in school.
You call that crap rap?
You've got to be joking.
(btw your avatar wishes he was sloking)

You're calling Cobalt pathetic?
Naming your badassery genetic?
You don't know the first thing about being poetic.

It's more than just rhyming.
It also involves timing.

Curse words are the worse words when it comes to flow.
They make you appear petty, weak, and sound rather low.
Words should be clean!
a well-oiled machine!
and when you look at this screen
I want you to glean what I mean
and leave this forum because honestly...

your prescence brings boredom.

Quote from Paintbrush

you poor, poor, fool.
you useless, useless, tool!
I shudder to think of what they'e teaching you in school.
You call that crap rap?
You've got to be joking.
(btw your avatar wishes he was sloking)

You're calling Cobalt pathetic?
Naming your badassery genetic?
You don't know the first thing about being poetic.

It's more than just rhyming.
It also involves timing.

Curse words are the worse words when it comes to flow.
They make you appear petty, weak, and sound rather low.
Words should be clean!
a well-oiled machine!
and when you look at this screen
I want you to glean what I mean
and leave this forum because honestly...

your prescence brings boredom.

Mmm, looks like Paintbrush
gave me the kickoff
"your prescence brings boredom."
Nice job, way to scorch'em
You burnt him to a crisp
His lines were blustering
Like a kid with a lisp
He was stuttering
Now I'm wondering, if he'll ever be recovering
Cause that beat-down was clean
You don't need to curse, to be king
He shoulda known this from the beginning
You don't beef with me
Cause I can get jerky
Mess around with me
I'll stuff you like a turkey
As you can see
I'm kinda hungry
Because honestly
My plate's pretty empty
Taking on such a weak emcee
You could never compete with me
I spit my verses easily
Flow my words breezily
I don't need Paintbrush, to help paint this room
I'm referring to your blood, and your doom
When we're done, it'll be red
After our fun, you'll be dead
We're the real deal
You won't find emcees more ill
We may be sick, but you've got the chicken pox
Cause you're cluckin like a chicken
Tryin to hide in a box
You just got struck worse then stricken
I think we're done here
Until you're ready to face you're fear
Stay clear, just disappear
Till then, dear.

Quote from Cobalt

Mmm, looks like Paintbrush
gave me the kickoff
"your prescence brings boredom."
Nice job, way to scorch'em
You burnt him to a crisp
His lines were blustering
Like a kid with a lisp
He was stuttering
Now I'm wondering, if he'll ever be recovering
Cause that beat-down was clean
You don't need to curse, to be king
He shoulda known this from the beginning
You don't beef with me
Cause I can get jerky
Mess around with me
I'll stuff you like a turkey
As you can see
I'm kinda hungry
Because honestly
My plate's pretty empty
Taking on such a weak emcee
You could never compete with me
I spit my verses easily
Flow my words breezily
I don't need Paintbrush, to help paint this room
I'm referring to your blood, and your doom
When we're done, it'll be red
After our fun, you'll be dead
We're the real deal
You won't find emcees more ill
We may be sick, but you've got the chicken pox
Cause you're cluckin like a chicken
Tryin to hide in a box
You just got struck worse then stricken
I think we're done here
Until you're ready to face you're fear
Stay clear, just disappear
Till then, dear.

Wow, you have a buddy now? Haha, how cute.
If you can't rap on your own, then I'll keep you on mute.

Your a stupid little shit, trying to get in my way.
So go home, you motherfucker, you just ruined my day.

I'm the lone wolf, and I'm on my patrol.
Try to fucking stop me bitch, cause I'm on a roll.

Your so fucking stupid and so fucking gay.
Now hand over the money, cause you've got a bill to pay.

This is seriously going nowhere. Listen, you should take more time and effort when making your lyrics. That was so bad and so short, I don't even feel the need to make a rap reply to it. So instead, I'll try to help out with some cc buddy.

Quote from Molgera

Wow, you have a buddy now? Haha, how cute.
If you can't rap on your own, then I'll keep you on mute.

Your a stupid little shit, trying to get in my way.
So go home, you motherfucker, you just ruined my day.

I'm the lone wolf, and I'm on my patrol.
Try to fucking stop me bitch, cause I'm on a roll.

Your so fucking stupid and so fucking gay.
Now hand over the money, cause you've got a bill to pay.

First of all, why do you randomly bold and italicize words? I don't see any connection, or reason behind doing this. So unless you have a reason, I'd suggest not doing it. Second, you should try to actually think about your lyrics when you write them. By this I mean that simple rhyming isn't enough to make a decent rap. You should try to include some clever wordplay I.E: puns, metaphors, similes, etc... Maybe try to mix up your rhyme scheme, don't just use couplets(although I use a lot myself) it's good to have some variety. And as Paintbrush and I both said, cursing is not required. The way you shove it into your verses seems forced, like you have a curse quota to meet. And your work isn't only lacking in quality, but also in quantity. I spit 19 bars when I went, and you responded with 4. The overall lack of quality, and even quantity(which isn't nearly as important) makes your work seem very rushed and sub par. Try harder, and keep practicing though, and I know you'll improve. ;D

Wow, so much for burns? I think your face is one.
I really should be done with my speedbattle animation, but that's mainly for fun
Drake ate a snake while it baked on a rake
The rake was blue cuz you does shoe.
"abcdefg" I like peanut butter jk I get an allergic reaction from it, "e"

Straight of G.

Quote from Cobalt

This is seriously going nowhere. Listen, you should take more time and effort when making your lyrics. That was so bad and so short, I don't even feel the need to make a rap reply to it. So instead, I'll try to help out with some cc buddy.



First of all, why do you randomly bold and italicize words? I don't see any connection, or reason behind doing this. So unless you have a reason, I'd suggest not doing it. Second, you should try to actually think about your lyrics when you write them. By this I mean that simple rhyming isn't enough to make a decent rap. You should try to include some clever wordplay I.E: puns, metaphors, similes, etc... Maybe try to mix up your rhyme scheme, don't just use couplets(although I use a lot myself) it's good to have some variety. And as Paintbrush and I both said, cursing is not required. The way you shove it into your verses seems forced, like you have a curse quota to meet. And your work isn't only lacking in quality, but also in quantity. I spit 19 bars when I went, and you responded with 4. The overall lack of quality, and even quantity(which isn't nearly as important) makes your work seem very rushed and sub par. Try harder, and keep practicing though, and I know you'll improve. ;D

Yeah I'm still working on it. This is my first attempt at it.

Quote from Molgera

Yeah I'm still working on it. This is my first attempt at it.

It's good to hear you took my cc with an open mind. I wasn't trying to be overly harsh, just letting you know the truth. And as I said good luck, you'll improve. ;D

Quote from Cobalt

It's good to hear you took my cc with an open mind. I wasn't trying to be overly harsh, just letting you know the truth. And as I said good luck, you'll improve. ;D

Naw, you weren't being harsh at all. :)
Thanks dude.

I'll try to come up with a better rap sometime soon if I can.